Both Sour Apple and Dream Wings have different reasons for needing to go and stay with ponies in Ponyville.
Sour has to go and spend time with his cousin Apple Jack and her friends despite his instant dislike for every pony around him. Dream Wings on the other hand needs to see a very old friend from Canterlot in order to hide from a creature that she has hidden in fear from every day since she was a young filly. However will these two new ponies be the one thing that manages to split apart the Elements and harmony, and consequentially the kingdom, forever? Or will they be the one thing that can stop the nightmare during daytime?
Chapters (8)
Oh by the way just thought I'd point out that I have not named the character after myself. The character of Dream Wings was a creation of mine quite a few months ago and I just grew to like her enough to use her name as my username. The same as my friend's name is Sour Apple after this character. Also we wrote a radio-play once with these characters and played those parts so our names just became the characters names.
In fact I'm nothing like Dream Wings in any way, as I kind of mention in my bio. My friend actually says I'm Applejack so there you go. Oh and if your reading this Sour Apple, you're Rarity if I'm Applejack
I'm not sure if this will make any sense at all, but I really like the words you use.
Sour Apple here and for everypony out there this story hoofing brilliant
and Dream Wings it's Me!!!!
Hello Sour, thanks for that, she says turning away in utter embarrassment. Oh well at least some people like the story, just to say I will take any criticisms: after all this isn't completely brilliant as it is only my first go; I really would like to know how to get better
I really like the plot of this. I thought Sour would like Rarity more since they both have that fashion sense, but I guess the point is that Dream Wings is the only one he's interested in. I love unequal relationships in stories. I can't wait to see where this goes.
670223 Hey Kartal, I didn't know you were on the list of proofreaders. I've been trying to find a proofreaders opinion of one of my stories for ages, so, be honest, how am I doing with this fan fic?
I just realized your picture of Dream Wings doesn't have a cutie mark. Is that significant?
683109 It may come up in a later story with her in but it doesn't really matter at this point. Dream Wings never managed to get her Cutie Mark because she was banished when she was a filly, as she grew older it became less important to her. Wait until she meets the CMC
684027 I can only imagine...
this interests me....
sour apple is a stalker
735392 Yes you are
735405 Did you check out the Pinkie story Sour. I think you'd like that one, hehehe
Not yet I will do that later
I get the title now. I did wonder about that...
Hold on...now I forgot why everypony's angry with everypony else.
Good
Ooh. Can't wait to see where this leads
well done