Chrissi Bumbles is a lot of things.
Clumsy? A bit.
Kind? You bet!
Suspicoius? No way in Faust.
Queen Chrysalis is a lot of things.
Evil? Perhaps.
Cold-hearted? Maybe.
Unable to feel emotions? No.
Chrysalis creates a new name for herself and re-infiltrates Canterlot, searching for a way to relinquish her title as Queen to Cadence. Along the way, she runs into a deep blue pegasus stallion with an lightning bolt mane. Literally. The stallion, named Thunder Bolt, is intrigued by Chrysalis, and decides to keep an eye on her.
Chrysalis, full of sadness, pushes the stallion's attempts for her heart away. However, she never expected this level of persistence. Will Queen Chrysalis, Ruler of the Changelings, fall to a simple pegasus stallion? Read to find out!
This story is a prequel to my earlier story, Chrysalis Cries. If you want, you can read this and then head over there afterwards. This'll help shed some light on the other story.
Art work by me. Base by Unknown.
Do you have an editor? You really seem like you need an editor.
7258416 No, but I am looking in to getting one. Thanks for asking!
7258906 How about a service trade? I edit your story in return for you making cover art for one of my own stories.
Also, 'queen' in the title was misspelled as queem.
7259071 I'l have to get back to you on that offer, because I'm laughing so hard about that spelling mistake. I'm such an idiot sometimes! Haha!
7259329 I'm an editor for two other stories, as well as the leader of the triple-author-collab team.
And I'm bored.