*edit*

ouch Friendzoned!

Confound it, I should be asleep...

BUT THAT AIN'T HAPPENING NOW, NOW IS IT?

*one chapter later*

A nice start, my curiosity as to where this will go has been piqued

Methinks I'll be tracking this

I have been meaning to read "This Nearly is Mine" I hope and bet I will enjoy this as much as I have "Two's Company, Three's a Crowd". Time to read and I will give my thoughts after

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Well After reading the story I must say I am enjoying the work Lithe and Billy, a wonderful first chapter to a story I know I will be reading from here on out. The idea of the shipping pair is also very interesting and just another reason that I will follow. Everything seemed good to me and continue the good work.

omg

Hmm...new story by Lithe...and Billy Colt...with a unique shipping pair...and an intriguing first chapter

tracked

I have my final AS level exam today. but the second that is finished I am RUNNING STRAIGHT HOME TO READ THIS!

WITH THE POWERS CONFERED TO ME I CLAIM ONE OF THE FIRST POSTS!

Yay~

Yayz a new ship to like... faved and tracked!

Harpo? As in Harpo Marx, greatest harp musician ever? Sweet.

wait...is that supposed to be frederic chopin?

Seems a good start to me =) although I feel like you used Applejack saying sugar cube a little excessively, but I'm not the writer so do as you will. I will be tracking this me thinks.

Romance+Rarity=turn off for me.

But have an upvote anyway because I'm not a heartless douchebag!

Maybe this one will actually have a happy ending for Frederic...

I jest.  

I am intrigued by this and I am looking forward to seeing more in the future.  

I liked it. In the end that is all that matters.

Please. My heart- it just can't take it anymore 5/5, but I somehow just found out about up/down voting So UP VOTE!

Ugh i never liked Frederic. Too boring. Anyway you got me interested and thats something. All other stories about Frederic have never awoken my interest yet this does. Hmm Strange well il be keeping an eye on this one. have a moustache and a thumbs up. And a track

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Lunar Justice

>A new story by the author of another story I'm reading... Eh.

>>A unique shipping story by a good author... Tracked

>>>A unique shipping story with TWO good authors... No words.

*walks into story in a Zoidberg-like manner*

What's this? Some writer that I like is collabing with another writer that I like, so I see. And they're making a unique and believable shipping pair?!

I like.

Please continue with the writing and the romance business.

You got the characters' personalities right. Dialogue is crisp and some lines are funny. A nice start to a potential great story; keep at it.

Oh yeah, might I mention that it made my blood boil to see Spike being... ignored (I suppose you could say). That might be the only problem I'll have with this fic. But again, keep at it.

i love to see my art as the cover xD

New ship I never saw before?! Tracked, faved, waiting next chapter!

>>638592638592

You are Lithe's graphic artist aren't you XD.

The reason why I'm here is that coincidentally, my name is Frederic.

Awkward...

Personally I have thing for Luna like Cloud Chaser does.

Luna is best pony right bro?

XD

>>639173639173

yeah, im his graphic artist of choise xD and yeah luna is freaking great, every time she is in the screen something awesome happens, or she does something great (like headbanging or wearing a freaking coat made of magical bats xD)

>>640174640174

You noticed the headbanging too?!?! When I saw that, I was like "shit son, CC was right! She is into metal!"

Now to wait until season 3 to see if they do anything with that XD

Ooh. Friendzoned. Ouch.

Interesting so far! Eagerly await the next chapter.

loving the story and will have to check out this nearly was mine keep up the good work guys, looking forward to the next chapter

Here's a Scootaloo for luck ... but seeing as there are two of you I'll give you a Sweetie bell as well

now don't fight over them

i like that for once, someone actually lets octy know whats happening with fredric...keep up teh good work!

I like this...yes...I like it very much

I think most guys have been in Fred's shoes. Find out the girl you want is a lesbian or having your girlfriend dump you for another woman.- It happens. I can actually see his depression coming from not being able to get with whom he wants but rather to be validated as a male. This chapter was nice and it set up the ship pretty well. I wanna see where this goes.

Is this supposed to be the same continueity as This Was Almost mine?

finally someone says something stupid octy

Octavia:

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_O_O.png

Me: back into the story baitch

Vinyl:

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_Scratch.png

Me: *slap* you all gun get  bitch slap now back in the story!!

*GASP* BALLS!! stompy stompy stompy NO! bad pinkie bad... now behave and you can have some cake

also great story

Not bad so far. You make Fred look like a more normal, casual pony. I had always pictured him as a bit more uppity. It's a little weird thinking of him differently, but you make it work.

Beautiful

>>650217650217

I don't know many lesbians IRL... or maybe it's just I don't bother talking to real life people all that much, despite getting along with everybody.

Good chapter, BTW. You managed to keep the formalities between Rarity and Frederic without doing anything too exaggerated. I could feel the chemistry between them building up, you know, how two high-class ponies go about their business. Good start!

I love the small transitions of your other story(Two's Company, Three's a Crowd) into this one. I feel I'm really going to enjoy it.I'm glad you didn't make Fred too uppity, he seems like a normal pony.

"That's the problem with lesbians"

Brilliant!!

I would love to see this update!

Good pace to this story so far, here's a brohoof for you. *brohoof*

Wow.

It's back.

Fantastic job, by the way.

IT LIVES!

"“If I may speak candidly, a true stallion walks beside his mare, not before or after her. He loves unconditionally, speaks truthfully, and cares genuinely."

Like. A. BOSS.

Yay! It's back!!!  This pleases me greatly.  

I wonder what Frederic is going to think about Octavia stalking him.  

Excellent story, I'll be watching this one for more.  Yay rarepairs!  (In more ways than one, since it's Rarity.)  

“Vinyl, knocking your brain around requires you actually having a brain,” she said with a small smirk.

“Is that why you say I’m ‘bucking your brai-’” Vinyl would have completed her sentence had a hoof not stuffed itself in her mouth.

“Just shut up,” Octavia said, unable to control the wild blush that had sprouted on her face. Vinyl, satisfied, just grinned silently.

Aaaah, OctaScratch. I do love it.

So glad you're back in the updating mood and I'm really starting to like Fred & Rares as a couple! Keep up the good work!