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>>3216532165 Yes rather, i extended this chapter from 1300 words, to just over 2000. But thanks for the comment, and don't worry, there will be more chapters coming in about a week. Thanks for reading!

Great! Sorry if it wasn't a very helpful comment but good to hear!

>>3217232172 Doesn't matter, I take any comment you'll post. I'm currently looking for some pre-readers though, Microsoft word doesn't like to fix grammtical errors or anything. I'll be working on writing the second chapter tomorrow actually but it'll have to wait to be published I love me some nice cliffhangers

*grammatical haha jk but I did spot a few words that needed capitalizing but typing on my phones a pain

And yes word isn't my favorite when it comes to fixing things.

>>3218232182 Yes my keyboard likes to mix up words and such. exactly why I need pre-readers. Interested?

Hmmmmm...I suppose.

>>3220932209 you'll ve notified when the new chapter is ready for prereading then. Thank you.

Hopefully more people will help also.

>>3221832218 i'd like that. Might submit to EqD, once I get more bugs ironed out

Good move.

>>3224332243 my flash engine failed on me, darned phone. This is far from perfect, still needs work

Oh I meant good idea fixing all the errors/kinks before putting it on EqD.

>>3224932249 I know, I'm going to look what needs to be worked on. Mostly capitilization and grammar though, which are easy fixes.

Really nicely done! the O.C was...fine, but it felt....i dont know, like it was just pasted into the story in the last moment before submitting the chapters.

>>3285332853 simple, it was. That's why he's been omitted. Trying to re-do this the way it was meant to be!

oh shit aj is in da hiz house this ish just go for realzy!

>>3313833138 oh hell yea

uh oh twilights in some serious shit noaw!

I feel dirty now

>>3319233192 eeyup, or is she?

>>3321333213 don't!

I feel i'm going to become know for romantic comedies. Pfffft.... Most likely

A chapter will be uploaded maybe the week after Thanksgiving, given my sinus infection clears up by then

this shit is kinda cool I guess

but it's extremely depressing to read w/ skyrim music

;c

>>3801438014 I wouldn't know, I haven't heard the music really. Depressing? I wasn't going for anything depressing here really, but thanks for commenting.

Hmm... Gildshy/Flutterda doesn't work with me... Maybe cause I'm stuck on the idea of the Gildiron ship... but that's just me.

>>3819838198 The thing is it's not really supposed to make sense, it's a spoof of those weird romantic comedies where polar opposties are pushed together and no one really likes the pairing but since the story is not based around them, no one really cares. GildaShy is just a spoof pairing, and Twilight's reaction are the watchers of that movie responding to the oddest pairing. I like spoofing cliches from movies, because it seems they're filled with them nowadays

This story is really awesome. Can't wait for the other chapters! :D

>>4147141471 Thanks, I should be saying the same with your story. Next chapter is in production right now, might not be released for a while though

Why is Celestia looking at my young avatar, I NEED AN ADULT!! Good story 5/5

>>4194841948 thanks, and there are no adults here. Celestia? Yeah, RUN.

I feel like it was out-of-character of spike not to stop twilight from doing this. It would have been beter for him to take the role of her guardian angel in this situatio and stop her well before it got this far out of hoof.

*sigh* im gonna lay it on ya.

Personally I liked the other version of this, the unmastered version.

I liked Rob as a character.

Twilight's story as depressed mare is nice, and quite grabbing yes. But I felt like Rob was the cherry on top of the sunday so to speak.

I dunno maybe it's just me but I liked the other version better This is good don't get me wrong. Just sayin

>>4196041960 He wanted her to be herself, no matter how. Plus, he wouldn't come to realize it might become an obsession of hers. I've seen weirder, parodying those weird movies where the unlikely people drink and no one cares to stop them.

>>4196541965 I decided to keep Rob in, a bit of a spoiler for next chapters. He's just too interesting of a character to leave out. He helped tie the parody part of this story, so don't worry, I'll edit the description later on. Big Mac will take a role in here by accompanying Rob sometimes.  

>>4196541965

...wow, you really like Rob?

I guess I really shouldn't be surprised... but I am. Heheh.

>>4952149521 hey, someone likes your character! BE HAPPY I COMMAND THEE!

FUCK YEA!

>>4953249532 Hey look, it's Rob! And Big Mac who will probably end up dead by the end of this. Just for you my friend, because you my friend... You're awesome. Really

I like it how the "SSSSSPPPPIIIIKKKEEE!!!!!" thing goes out of the borders

And I can't help but read Rob's voice with a thick Russian accent... But that always bugged me... If he was from stalliongrad... Wouldn't he be very used to the cold?

>>4975949759 resilient not immune

why is spike cussing? lol it makes so much sense

>>5009750097 because it's funny.

>>5010750107 aww shit you got me there

>>5012850128 like a boss

>>4976049760 ~oooooohhhhhh~ That makes much more sense! [Who said that? I can't remember... I think it was applebloom so...] (There are no happy-bloom emotes...)

An' I guess... [insert number of years] years in a warm climate would adjust your temperature as well... Wait... Did he Just move to Ponyville or has he been there for a while? I can't remember and I don't feel like re-reading the whole story to find out.

>>5245052450 He's been there some months. But Spike threw chilled water also.

>>5246652466 Ahh yeah.

Freezy water plus freezy wind makes freezy pony quite freezy.

>>5276452764 quite

yay

Twilight you FOOEL  (or FOAEL, whatever you prefer.)

>>8269682696 In the words of the people from The Whitest Kids You Know.

"Now you fucked up."

WOAH AWESOME IT FINALLY UPDATED!

Reading it nao

>>8273282732 Yeah, it's really been a while hasn't it?

I promise that it won't happen again...

Wait...

It's almost Christmas then...

FUCK,

DAMN SCHOOL AGAIN

What can I say, I Lol'ed

>>8277482774 That's good, there will be more of Twilight's drunken antics later on.

>>8277782777Eeexxxxcelent

>>8282182821 Oh yes, but there won't be another one for a while though...

End of the season coming up soon.

Leave it to Twilight to make a rather simple prank into something extremely complex. Luckily the end result is the same: a great example of schadenfreude.

>>8284382843 Yeah, Twilight makes things copmplicated. It's a fact of nature

I lol'ed, this was so random

funniest thing i have seen in WEEEEKS!

>>8302783027>>8322383223 I think that was the point my good sirs or madames.

hæ hæ...

It's stuff like this that make me laugh the most.

>>8346383463 Yeah haha, it's always fun to include things like this and such.

I'm very sorry, but i just can't bring myself to read this story... far too depressing.: fluttercry: 5 stars though... i think i'll stick with happy shipping

>>8501385013 Oh no, it doesn't get too depressing anymore. It's just Rob is elusive of Twilight because...

I can't tell you, you might find out in season 2

>>8284382843 i was just thinking about that when i finished the chapter

>>8862788627 I bet everypony was, and that's slightly what I was going for too

On and unrelated note, season 2 will be underway sometime in January or Februrary,

Thanks to everypony who stuck around with this fic

>>115459115459 HUH! GASP!

Hmmm...

Methinks a party is going to turn into disaster.

Loving this story so far; when will the next chapter be uploaded? Or are you still working on it?

>>401824401824

Haven't worked on this in AGES.

I will though, once my fucking mind decides to clear the fuck up for once.

>> Eclipse

Oh my...

I just seen the time gap between now and the last chapter...

I see what you're saying...