When a young orphaned dragon has to move to Equestria from her home little did she know that she would go on a life changing adventure.
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I'm a goofy fun loving guy who likes to read, write and play video games. My favorite character is Twilight and my favorite CMC is Apple Bloom. I like Spike stories
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I can't figure it out my sister's crying and gorging herself on ice cream....
competition I tell you she feels like an old nag
there's a new dragon in town & she's toting big iron in the cutes department
It's only Dim Sum Spike will be hungry again in an hour
I'll be Spikes mane course! He's MINE !
mmmmmmmmm marsh mellows for after diner. . . Spike!
6187061 marshmallows mmm..
This is a great start so far and I can't wait for the rest. I like Dim Sum's name too. I want some Chinese food now...
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I'm glad you like it so far. Dim Sum how cute
Yes! Dim Sum stories for the Dim Sum group!
this is a really good story so far in my opinion.
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Thank you for the compliments I appreciate it!
14 favorites in two hours? That is insane
Trying to imagine her voice sounds like.
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I'd like to imagine she has a young feminine voice. I'd like to think somebody like Tara Strong could voice act her.
6187978 Kerry Williams, Lisa Ortiz, Michelle Knotz, etc.....
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Also very good choices they could all work
6188020 Grey Delisle.
Oooooh interesting....
Only tip I can give you is perhaps smoothing sentences over- less starting them with the same thing 'she did this, she did that' Other than that, well done ^_^
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Thanks good to know my writing is getting better
Oooh. Me likey. I've always wanted to write a dragon fic. Nice job. You've caught my attention.
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Thanks that means alot me
"What about me Twilight?"
"What about you sla-uh-SPIKE!" "What about you Spike?"
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Cute story, have a like
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I would like to think their relationship is more of brother and sister
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Thanks!
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Spike is my baby!
Just saying, this would be cuter if Spike was treated as Twilight's son
At this rate, the d'aawws will be bursting through the seams by chapter 4... 5, latest. Nicely done.
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Thanks it's good to hear that
Dim sum is so adorable I just want to hug her. This story is shaping up to be another great one.
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Thanks I love your love it makes me happy
Jesus I accidentally hit the publish button. F*ck me!
Wow, a story about new dragon called Dim Sum
Your story is very interesting. Keep your good work, ILIKEBOOKS
When will you write chapter 3, ILIKEBOOKS? I can't wait
And so the picture of Dim Sum is really cute. Did you draw her?
6231719 Its all good, nice to see you active though.
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Thanks I appreciate the feedback
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I found the picture by /mlp/ I know we don't speak of that place.
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Chapter 3 should be out by noon today. I am writing it as we speak.
6232198 What's your time? I'm eastern time.
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U.S. Eastern standard I live in Ohio
Typical Diamond Tiara, I hope somebody will make her apologize for her outburst here. Great chapter and looking forward to the next chapter.
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Why is she so mean? Anyway thanks.
6234347 I would love Spike to just blow some dragon fire at her mane, resulting it to catch on fire. Diamond Tiara is just a shell protecting her nice side. One day she will either hatch or be trapped in it forever. That's how I look at her anyways, and Silver Spoon too.
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I could never hurt Tiara even though she is a jerk I could never hurt a cute filly
6237754 Same here, probably emotionally, but NEVER physically with gore. Probably some tomatoes to their faces, but that's it.
This is now getting interesting... I wonder if this will be like the greedy growth.
6250681 You're just going to have to find out.
You mean what has the Mane 6 done? Broke the Baby Dragon commandment: Thou shall not intentionally provoke Spike the Dragon.
6251213 Dim Sum brought this on him
I really didn't. Typically "Twilight adopts a new child, becomes a great family" is mutually exclusive to "Spike/someone else comes to believe Spike's treated like an assistant first, and a friend and family member as an afterthought."
Usually it just puts Spike aside and focuses on the new child, while Spike takes on a role that, like in canon, is hard to define.
Yikes. That was a shocking turn of events... kinda saddening. Nice job with that plot twist. Keep up the good work.
6251441 Not to mention Spike is a kid, sure he may be mature, but maturity doesn't help when it comes to feeling used and unwanted. I would be depressed if my friends only used me for help and didn't want me around. Spike didn't take it like I would, he turned his sadness into anger.
6251508 Thank you. I will do my best to write
6251535 He is a baby dragon. Tantrums are expected.
6251697 Not this kind bro. Not this kind.
6251701 uh oh. Must be baaaaaaad!
6251711 I wonder if I should raise this up to teen because of violence.