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Chocovich 339146

Joined May 2012
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    Chocovich's Stories (33)

    • Unforeseen Consequences
      Twilight's mistake with Starswirl's spell had changed each of her friend's lives, and everything went back to the way it was before. Or did it...?

      19,683 words · 4,152 views · 514 likes · 21 dislikes
    • Blood on the Snow
      After an accident in the Everfree forest Applebloom is left blind, and now has to adapt to her new life
      6,126 words · 1,042 views · 78 likes · 3 dislikes
    • I Dare You!
      After cider season ended Applejack thought it would be fun to invite her friends over to enjoy the last barrel, but she wasn't expecting it to get as out of hoof as it did...
      8,394 words · 5,254 views · 528 likes · 72 dislikes
    • Where Do I Belong? What Is My Purpose?!
      As a Pegasus with an abstract cutie mark, you head to Ponyville in search of your place in life.
      16,141 words · 822 views · 49 likes · 3 dislikes
    • Welcome to... Equestria?
      2,652 words · 323 views · 40 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Just a Little Chaos
      12,558 words · 851 views · 64 likes · 5 dislikes
    • The CMC in... Scootaloo's Past!
      6,940 words · 989 views · 48 likes · 3 dislikes
    • The Switch!
      3,273 words · 699 views · 39 likes · 2 dislikes
    • The Half Blood Princess
      5,072 words · 1,379 views · 98 likes · 11 dislikes
    • Royal Intervention
      13,838 words · 1,191 views · 66 likes · 7 dislikes

    A fairly normal Human-2-Pony story, but rather than them being immediately okay with their new life as ponies, this takes a look at what if they can't accept it until there is a choice put before them? Pony, or human?

    Other unique feature is that people can choose one of 3 endings, and each ending will have it's own unique twist to it

    (Main character is a chocolate toned Pegasus, so imagine that every time it says you, it means that pony ;3)

    (Some swears and some suggestive misunderstandings)

    First Published
    23rd May 2012
    Last Modified
    23rd May 2012

    Comments ( 19 )

    #1 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Not a bad little story! :pinkiehappy:

    #2 · Chapter 3 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Since you're the first person-"

    It should say pony. I don't care about the other mistakes, but FIX THIS SO AH WILL BE HAPPEH!!!!!

    Good story so far.

    #3 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>635632 Thanks, I honestly wasn't sure if this would get liked by anyone :twilightblush:

    >>635792 I'll get right on it, didn't even catch that one myself... And fixed :pinkiehappy:

    #4 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This was a nice short story It really made my day!

    #5 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>636661Thanks, I'm happy that I made someone's day little brighter :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'm a bad guesser, tell me.

    now.:pinkiecrazy:

    This was a really great story, and i think that the way that you handled the choice between the real world and equestria is the best that i have read.  You could have distinguished the difference between voice and thought in that scene though.  other than that, i loved the story.

    I read all the endings, but i liked Derpy the best. probably because she is my favorite pony.

    #7 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>637859 Thanks, this being the first thing I've ever really tried to write correctly I wasn't too sure what to do about the voice and the thoughts, but at least the point got across that it was a deep internal conflict that had to be dealt with, and Derpy ftw :derpytongue2:

    (If I ever do something like that again, I'll make sure to make it a fairly obvious distinction between voice and thoughts ;3)

    #8 · Chapter 9 · 51w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>638002 ill have to subscribe to you so i can be sure to find any of your future stories, I would love to help you in any way i can.

    #9 · Chapter 9 · 50w, 5d ago · · ·
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    LOvEd IT

    #10 · Chapter 9 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    no why did she go slower

    #11 · Chapter 9 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>790514 Because she's more conservative. That and Big Mac would have been in the way :raritywink:

    #12 · Chapter 9 · 47w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #13 · Chapter 1 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is a really good story and I am first!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild:

    #14 · Chapter 2 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::rainbowwild::rainbowwild:

    #15 · Chapter 4 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #16 · Chapter 6 · 25w, 21h ago · · ·
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    this is the hardest decision i never made i dont want to broke the heart of anypony

    #17 · Chapter 7 · 25w, 21h ago · · ·
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    Idk, maybe because of Big mac or its because she your fav. Pony and you dont want that the other brony know what you really wish what happen

    #18 · Chapter 9 · 13w, 6d ago · · ·
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    2 stories down and still having fun. :pinkiehappy:

    I wonder, what kind of foal AJ would make? :ajbemused:

    Oh well, on to the next story!:yay:

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