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JaydexTheShadowKnight
I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?
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Well, I think this pretty much sums up my reaction.
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What.... just.... happened....
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You do know that pee does not come out of the marehood...right
You might wanna replace feet and foot with hooves.
You know... since ponies got hooves.
And for the story... very cloppy.
635202 Ohhh..Hahaha..That slaps me on de knee.
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Do they not have seatbelts?
Lord Fedme - I am well aware that pee is expelled from the urethra. Like some of my fellow fic writers who wrote similar stories, I used marehood - figuring the term referred to the entire genitalia (outside, and both holes inside). I also used it because it sounded better than using common slang terms. Granted that may seem a little ironic given this is a clopfic, but that's what I decided upon.
DeiStar - Before I used foot or feet in this story, I looked up the definition of hoof (courtesy of dictionary.com) and this is what i got - the horny covering protecting the ends of the digits or encasing the foot in certain animals, as the ox and horse. So a hoof is part of a pony's foot. Thus using the word foot or feet is not incorrect. Ultimately, it all depends on how technical you want to get. I mainly used foot to help save from overusing the word hoof in every sentence. Varying my sentence structure was drilled into my head by a variety of teachers and critics. So you have an idea where I am coming from.
635306 As Jaydex said, Marehood does generally refer to the whole mound including the insides- so pee does come from there, indirectly.
Foot does sound more human than pony but you can indeed use foot to define the hooved part- it didn't strike me as odd here, so wording worked out pretty nicely.
Also; This was sweet clop, not too full on porn and still handling kinks in a good way.
Not a full on urine fetish sex scene but it worked out pretty nice that way. Though as a princest fan I was a bit sad that Celestia did not want a repeat with her sister. Oh well, Great job!
I fucking support this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quite good, I found it rather interesting.
Sequel please!
Vivex - Thank you for the support regarding pee and marehood and the use of foot/feet in place of hoof!
And thank you for the comment regarding the story too. While it is at heart a clopfic, I challenged myself to keep it somewhat tasteful. I like creating a sensual feeling in stories like these, while keeping it naughty but not too raunchy. Oh and don't worry Luna and Celestia may yet have another repeat in the future. Who knows what's going on in Luna's mind or Celestia's for that matter? 
Frizzy - A sequel? I deliberately made the ending so one could be possible, but I hadn't considered actually doing one. Hmmm, maybe if the story is popular enough I might just do one.
sure it was um good and it was very cloppy
Man... that was glorious!
I so want to see Cadance finally get her stallion to play her cute little game. It would be lovely!
And silly Tia... You can't bottle it up like that. Open up. Have fun!
I'd also like to see Luna's post pleasure picnic reaction...
Poor mare just got pleasured for the first time in a millennium... By her own niece.
Just what would that do to the lovely mare of the night...
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At first I was like
puu.sh/vTOh
But then I was like
puu.sh/vTNt
Princest is bestcest!
In response to your pm, I really enjoyed this fic. I agree with everyone that you should write a next chapter/sequel. The story is quite well written and it'd be awesome if you continued as a clopfic writer.
You are going to proofread this, right? I'll read past the first paragraph when I get home, I'm at school right now dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png
>I advice you read no further
>Though sadly her mind was hardly on the magnificent vista sprawling out before her purple eyes
Needs moar comma
>She let out a frustrated sigh turning away form the window
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Nice story!
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Do a sequel! :D
iloveportalz0r - I have proofread this 3 times prior to its posting. Of course the occasional typo still lives on. As for the sentence:
>Though sadly her mind was hardly on the magnificent vista sprawling out before her purple eyes.
You're the first to mention it needing any commas. Admittedly it is a little long but I'm not certain a comma is warranted. I did fix the other two typos. Thanks for pointing them out.
TwilightPsycho - I'm nearly convinced to do a sequel now.
639838 Damn thats clever!
642133 Who's hoof do I need to pee on to get that sequel!
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637765 I could see a sequel that details what happens between Cadence and Shining Armor when she brings up the fetish to him again.
Okay, okay...I get the message.
Apparently my clopfic was better than I hoped. And there is plenty of demand for a sequel now! 
richfilies - You don't need to pee on anyone's hoof...unless you mean Luna wants to know who's hoof she needs to pee on!
Anyway I will do a sequel chapter. Heck before I posted this, I retooled the ending so a sequel could be an option. The original ending was more on the cloppy side. Though Vivex might have enjoyed that one.
Oh and sorry I have no luck replying to anyone's comments directly. Every time I click the reply button I get a random number that links to nothing. It's the only feature on here that doesn't seem to work for me.
Absolutely awesome ^^
Question: im going to be starting a youtube channel for reading clop-fics and i want yours to be my first :3 any objections?
asdfgfdhiusjgkrlefiowhlsugwedsu *drools*
ExplicitEscritoire - Oh my gosh! You want to feature my clop-fic as the first on your youtube channel!
Please go ahead! I'm very flattered! I really enjoyed writting this story, and have been equally enjoying re-reading it, but I had no idea it was going to be popular like this! In all honesty I wasn't sure how well this would be received because it involved the pee fetish. Thank you! 
646605 The random number is translated to commenter, so it notifies them.
So it should look like a number while you write but not when posted.
And and I'm happy to see there's more planned! Be interesting to see what you do with it.
And do I detect that the original ending had princest?
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But it may take some time. I have some other projects in the works. But since this is popular, I'll certainly continue this! Oh and thanks for the info regarding post replies. 
I will definitely add more to this story. Not sure what all I want to add. Obviously people want to see if she can convince Shining Armor to share her fetish. But I might add something with Luna and Celestia. And who knows what else.
Oh and the original ending hinted at future encores involving the three princesses. But I wasn't sure how well that would be received, plus this ending leaves the door wide open for just about anything.
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Glad you enjoyed the story and Cadence's horngasm. You're the first to comment specifically about it...though I suspect the others who loved it / said it was awesome, enjoyed the horngasm scene too!
This is the most cloppy clopfic I've read!
And I'd like to read a sequel or more chapters too!
Most Amazing Clopfic I Have Ever Read.
You Sir/Maddam Deserve A Favorite, Like, Follow, Read Later, And A Place On Equestria Daily's And The Producer's Inure Circle. 
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Your response is not unexpected. Actually I'm amazed I didn't get more comments like yours...along with the endless slew of "Why's" that normally follow fics like this one.
Of all my fics, you chose to start with the clopfic. lol
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Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the kind words. Though Equestria Daily doesn't allow clopfics, so I doubt they'd want to post my story.
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As for how long I spent on this...well. The story's inception and planning took about two to three days, most of which I mentally mapped out while I was at work. Then inspiration struck me like a torrent and I managed to write the bulk of this over a weekend (actually writing time was probably less than 10 hours). I did do a good deal of brainstorming as I wrote this too. After the rough draft I read through it several times (making corrections and such) and ultimately decided to modify the ending...hence leaving the door open for a sequel. While I am planning on a sequel, I'm not entirely sure what all I plan on including in it. Obviously the bulk with involve Cadence and Shining Armor...but I'm seriously considering adding some material with Luna and Celestia, though I'm not sure what I want to have them do just yet. 
My love for Cadence also increased about 10 fold while I worked on this story!
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I have no shame for writing this! Therefore I happily return your bro hoof! *bro hoof*
And I'd like to share a little detail with you. I was encouraged and inspired to write this type of clopfic by some fellow writers on here. I owe my thanks to: 641895, 637271 and especially to 640545! Their fics are quite enjoyable and introduced me to an audience for this type of clopfic.
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Those pics are worth more than any words you could have typed! Thanks for the comment! I loved the pics of Celestia!
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BTW, if you're into this kind of kink, you might want to read chapter 4 of my Princess Molestia fic, if you haven't already.
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You have my thanks for writing that excellent chapter. That and the pics you used in your story helped inspire me too. Before seeing them in your fic, I originally saw those images on another site called e621. I'll also have to check out the rest of Molestia's Chronicles! While Luna is my favorite pony, I am quite fond of Celestia as well! 
Already did and loved it! Heck it's where I got some of the inspiration for this story. Where do you think I got the inspiration for Celestia's naughty little tale that she shared with Luna and Cadence.
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You found those images on e621? Because they're originally from Ask Princess Molestia. It started off more about the sun princess, but now it's more about Luna and videogames... yeah. IDK.
I'm so glad I could serve as inspiration for something. It's a thrilling feeling.
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But yeah there have been a lot of Luna video game related ones as of late. But I especially like the pics with Luna and Celestia, specifically when she keeps tricking Luna. They are just so cute.
Yeah I knew where those came from, they were just being shared on e621. Until I finally gave it some thought, I googled "Ask Princess Molestia and finally found the tumblr page.
Glad you feel thrilled from inspiring me!
>She was thankful that it didn’t’ cost her
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>Green gassy fields stretched out nearly as far the eye could see
I'm sure it smells lovely
>She knew something was going to need done before they left
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this story pisses me off.
needs streaming video
sorry, all I have to share are a few piddly puns
I CAME!
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It's in the works. In fact I've finally got the planning for it done. It's going to be done as 3 short stories, each one starring one of the three princesses.
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Then if 8,000+ words is too long, you won't want to read my other clopfics: "Apple Bucking with a Beauty" 9,000+ words, "More Than Their Customer" 11,000+ words, and "Her Gentle Hooves" 12,000+ words. Though, those three are far more popular than this one was.
Bottom line: ponies are awesome, even when they are just peeing.