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Mayhew Cullen


Forged from the eldest fires and cast upon the seething shore, broken and remade, alive and dead. We are killer and monster, savior and saint. Now I am become writer, creator of worlds.

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That twisted flaming ball in the sky is driving Luna crazy with heat exhaustion. Celestia smiles as she turns up the heat just a little more.


After being freed from Nightmare Moon only a few weeks ago, Luna is having trouble adjusting to the modern language, lifestyles, fashion, cuisine, and manners. But more than those she is failing beautifully to adjust to the development of a blistering heatwave.

Can Celestia be trusted to help her end the unbearable days of restless sleep and sweat soaked bedsheets?

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Okay I had this idea yesterday morning, because of fans... and other stuff but yeah I had fun. See I’m not completely hopeless when it comes to writing.

The cover art is from the show, so all props go to the animators and other lovely folks who make our pony show for us.

Oh and behold my ribbon of office!
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I'll see you at the next chapter.

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I'm not sure what to think...

6167098 Well I certainly can't tell you what to think, but thank you for reading.

first daughter of Faust

Could it be?

6167372 Sure, why not? Here I thought you might comment on the mysterious Fantasia, who is Faust's second daughter, but hey, I'm just a mad man.

6167442 I did wonder about that. But the implications of Celestia and Luna being the daughters of Lauren Faust more interesting. I'd assume Cadence is the second... but that wouldn't make sense since Luna is older than her.

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The idea that Celestia and Luna are daughters of Faust is actually fairly well-known in fanon.

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Also Cadance, apparently.
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Cadance actually has her origins explained in soft canon (as opposed to hard canon, that which is established in the show); in Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell, Cadance reveals that she was born a pegasus and became an alicorn at the same time she discovered her cutie mark. This is as opposed to Celestia and Luna, who have been confirmed as born alicorns in the comics, if I'm not mistaken; it's generally accepted that our two born alicorns are immortal, whereas our ascended alicorns are mortal, which I believe was forced by the show staff due to Luna/Celestia agelessness and bronies complaining on Twitter post-Twilicorn about how Twilight is going to have to see all of her friends die while her age remains the same.

6167455 So you've never seen first alicorn god horse Lauren Faust? There are some adorable pictures of "Fausticorn" playing with Tia and Woona.

Still no, Cadence keeps her youth and the random Alicorn OC doesn't get noticed at all. I'm sticking with Cadence being the reincarnation of a part of Princess Amore. Then fun twist is that Chrysalis as well is another reincarnation of a different part of Amore. Now I will start putting together that story. I think I can make it really good too. Cadence and Chrysalis must join forces to prevent Princess Amore from reintegrating them into herself and causing them to cease to exist.

6167493 I love the one with Tia and Woona fighting in the back seat of the car. Also the first one where Tia is wearing the obviously too large crown.But yes, hooray for soft canon I can choose to ignore or follow as much of it as I want! Like soft ice cream.

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I've seen it before, but I've never taken it seriously. Celestia and Luna are universal constants. For them they are the beginning and the end.

6167556 Yes, but in many cases something had to begin the beginning. Oh well, as long as I have fun writing about Celestia's mom I will continue to do so.

Very cute, and such an interesting way to go about helping ponies embrace the night.

6167581 Thank you, it kind of made enough sense to me that I could make a short little story about it, so three cheers for actually getting some writing done in this heat.

6167556 You should post stuff like that as an opinion not a statement.
Cute story. :scootangel:

6169501 Thanks, it was a fun exercise in writing adorable pony royalty.

Sort of a dick move, but also really sweet and adorable. I'm torn.

6171094 Yes mild discomfort for an entire country all for the sake of her beloved sister... who is also in discomfort... My God! I've written Trollestia without intending to... What have I become?

Usually I'm against made up additional names in fics. But for comedic purposes, this didn't really take away from the story as a whole. And there are very few stories where that's true [this one and the Flash fic I read].

That said. It's funny that you didn't mean to make this a Trollestia fic, It's an adorable Trollestia, but still accidental Trollestia is best Trollestia. Kudos.

6409295 Well she was Trollestia with intentions of the Bestia... sorry tired me is sometimes poetic... or crazy.

Now I need to read this one because I can't remember the long name I used.

wow that was bucking amazing story truly outstanding

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Wow, thanks, honestly it was just fun to write. Celestial and Luna are really fun characters to put in these situations.

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