• Member Since 27th Oct, 2013
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Verve Vision


Hey, I'm Verve Vision. I'm the ideas guy around here. When I have some free time I'll share some stories with you all.

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Ruby has a nice life. Her family is rich, she is just as proper as anypony in Canterlot, and she can have almost anything she wants. Anything besides not receiving odd stares and respect for her and not her position.

This is the story of Ruby Gorget and her journey through life.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

I am totally digging Social Justice and I want to see Ruby enjoy a happy life with her parents. Though given the summary I'm fairly certain things won't be easy for her, I think once she meets the Crusaders she'll be better off. And just think of the digging related Cutie Marks they can attempt with her help!

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Thank you for commenting! I'm going to try and convey the best story I can!

6164635 Just make sure you occasionally throw the dog a bone!

You have won many feels... I'm keeping some in reserve for later chapters. But that picture is DAAAAAWWWW inducing!

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Thank you! I spent like 2 hours on that, I'm glad you like it

6235378 If the rest of the chapters have pics like that I'll be happy!

This is really impressive for a first time effort.

Hell, there's writers that's been on this site since its founding that don't dare try illustrating their stories since its such a make or break thing.

One little tip, though: USE THE GROUPS!

Outside of the rare story that manages to get enough momentum right off the front-page to get featured right out of the gate, they're the best way to draw in readers. More readers mean more feedback and exposure, so you really want that for more then just that giddy feeling of seeing numbers go up.

This is a good story

Glad to see this ain't dead :pinkiehappy:

What 7218562 said.

Ruby is just... Dawww~! :rainbowkiss:

Ruby is adorable!!! I can totally see her tail being classed as a lethal weapon when she gets really happy. I can also see her sniffing like crazy whenever her favorite foods are being cooked.

This is pretty interessting, and while I somehow like a happy bonding time, I think I can enjoy it if it is going to be about her being accepted too.
What I mean is, I just hope she has a few good friends and it is not only sad for her, but I do actually enjoy some bitter sweet stuff.

Nice job there, I know there has to be a timeskip somewhere, but I hope you still can show us some bonding moments.
I'm more or less talking about some first time reaction stuff. I mean like her meeting her first and probably only friends.

Maybe you can even think about stuff that she would do differently than other foals. Maybe one day her mother thinks she is missing, but she only made a tunnel somewhere in the Garden or stuff like that.

I'm not good with grammar, so I have different things that tell me if a story is good or not, and I can already tell that this feels more interessting and well made so far.

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Thanks for the comment, it really inspired me! There will be plenty of bonding moments don't worry and I'm hoping to slow down the story in a few parts to take the time to tell the story properly. I hope to write more soon but I'm very busy with work and school. I hope to get the next chapter out soon!

I hope you decide to continue this story but if you didn't enjoy writing it than I understand why it would remain discontinued

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I actually think about this story a lot and i do plan on writing more and even want to finish it. I have a lot of the plot planned out in my head but I have a hard time sitting still to write and sometimes when I get to a calm part of the story I get stuck. There will be two pictures in the next chapter mainly because i couldn't think of a a smoother way to describe new characters. But hey, two pictures! The next one will mostly be to introduce characters and to show some more cute moments but i think the one after that will move along the story a bit more. Thanks for commenting it really gives me motivation to continue!

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And then he died.

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