I just have to do this

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Not a bad story, I want to see how it develops

Sounds like it could be interesting

Well, this story certainly has potential. Not bad so far. I'm not sure about suddenly having the behavior of a foal as an effect of amnesia, but I havn't studied it. I'm interested.

This story is so far, one of the most fun and original pieces of fanfic I have ever read :D

It's positively magnificent! I this!

Please make many new chapters, I'll be following this fic all the way till the end

Hooray for foal

I had an Idea simular to this, however Trixie just forgot who she and everypony else was, she then wonderd into ponyvile one night and Twilight desided to take care of her. She wasn't mentaly a foal.

There's a typo on the description... Other than that, this looks promising!

>>631555631555

Fixed! ^_^;;

Pretty good, confused how she managed not to have any serious physical injuries froma fucking cliff fall

but I won't question it

>>632295632295

Well she wound up in a stream, so the general assumption is supposed to be that she fell into some deep water at the bottom of the cliff, and was washed away. Or maybe she uncionciously used whatever magic she had left to protect herself. Take your pick.

Thoroughly enjoyable first chapter! I haven't really read anything like this here before, so, in contrast to alot of the other works here, this feels very fresh. Favourited of course, and I'm eagerly waiting to see where you go from here, since this has all the potential to be a terrific story. Good job thus far!

>>632327632327 water is hard as concrete from that high up, but you know what, it's okay, because magical ponies

>>632354632354

Orly? I didn't know that. But if you say so :3 Yeah, I'll just go with the "magic, I don't need to explain!" explanation.

>>632374632374 lol, fair enough, it works

not many people know that actually, but i'm from the san francisco area and the bridge wouldn't work so well for suicide if it wasn't that way

Oooh, this is great.  Looking forward to more!

sounds interesting... tracking

This actually looks very promising. Will now be tracking.

interestingly enough blunt force trauma to the head is the least likely method of inducing Trxie's degree of amnesia its more likely caused by the trauma of being in so many near death situations in rapid succession could induce it though if I remember right I could be wrong however its been a while since I read about it... anyways very nice story so far looks like it will be a fun one to read.

Not sure if one can regress to foal mindset without taking permanent brain damage, but Twilight shook off an anvil, piano and flower pot to the noggin, so I guess she's gonna be okay, or at least functional.

-Clicks the stalk button-

Wow.  Trixie's father is a giant douche.  I'd really like to see him get what's coming to him, but it probably won't happen.  Other then that, I'm enjoying this so far.

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Lol, Trixie always has to have the Twilight Sparkle.

Beat by Twilight at everything... just call her ugly, cuz she is ugly!

Why do I hate Twilight so much?! I think she's too much of a smartie pants try-hard, and I know that I could never be that good... cuz I don't try that HAAAAAAAAAAARD.  OH WAAAAAAAAAIT, TWILIGHT HAD THE ADVANTAGE OF A LUCKY magical overload to become Celestia's Protege!

THIS STORY IS NIIIIIIIIICE!

LUVIN' dis shit

D'awwwh! <3

Now I have a different view of Trixie--

As I'm reading this I'm imagining her as a little filly,

and I'm imagining Twilight as her mother :3

Adorable!! Can't wait to read more :3

NEXT CHAPTER WHY YOU NO HERE YET

This is pretty funny, but why does she revert to a foal? I don't think amnesia can do that, can it?

Beautiful Chapter Keep it up!!!!!!

Oh man, I've been waiting for this <3 I love the story so far

Blargh. i sense a depressing drop in quality from the first chapter to this one. I love the story, though.

Could of done without the hostage situation(since when do the ponies do business with the Diamond Dogs) but that aside nice chapter.

This was soooooo GOOD

Trixie's first words being Twilight: ALL OF MY D'AAAAAWWWWWWW AND HHHHHHHHNNNNNNGGGGGGGG

This fic is going in my "Best Fanfics In Existence" map

Oh wow this was amazing! didnt quite understand that last part though...

Oh my gosh I love this story

Dat ending. I don't get it.

>>699836699836 if your talking about the thing under twilights letter

it's a fragment of her memory

Yeesh. Trixie's father is a royal jerk. No wonder she was such a pain when she first came to Ponyville.

I've never wanted to injure a pony so badly before now.

I think this deserves the right to the [Sad] tag...

Love it. MORE TRIXIE, PLEASE.

About the A/N: First I was like then i was like but then I was like again but then when you said you were going to do another fic i was like

>>717310717310

Yeah, sorry if you wanted it to go on a bit longer. But like I said, I'm just not enjoying it that much, and I don't wanna spend time working on something if I don't enjoy it. Or it'll just not turn out so well, and I'd probably leave it half-finished.

It's a shame, cause I really love Twixie fics, and was hoping to do a Twixie slice of life one day. But after this, I'm not sure it'd turn out so well. One-shots maybe, but definatly not any longer stories.

>>717383717383

Meh. I'm just overly obsessed with Trixie

A very good chapter

I assume that the foal Trixie is now gone for good, seeing as Trixie has regained a good portion of her memories and social abilities? i'll miss the cute and innocent Trixie

Poor Trixie, so much pain... no pony deserves this

>>671946671946

No, but these are magical horses. I'm not going to question it too much.

TRIX'S DAD WILL SUFFER THE WRATH OF THE MOTHERLAND

THIS STORY IS BRILLIANT. @.@ Looking forward to more!

Wow, never thought I would feel sorry for Trixie of all ponies, but this story makes me feel....

The amnesia angle is a little overdone in stories but it does make for effective drama. What I'm speculating for future parts is that Trixie eventually remembers everything and reverts back to her old persona, grudges against Twilight and all. This will really test just how much Twilight is willing to go through to keep friendship alive.

You've caught my interests so keep at it!

Is he going to kill her?

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Dun dun dun.....

Urge to kill Black Cat... rising

Either way, a very interesting chapter chap!

If that bastard so much as touches trixie imma kill his whole damn FAMILY!!!   Wait...

Shame on you Yukito! Fancypants is happily married!