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Flutterpriest


I wrote hoers (Ko-Fi/Patreon)

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Did you really have to get all tied up in writing something this long?
You might say you were a slave to this story.


...fuck I'm not as good at these pun posts as you.
Where's my fucking scotch.

6165013 Huh...Flutterpriest making a story...okay wish me luck, and your scotch is in the glove box of your car, drink responsibly.

6165097 Drink responsibly or no more hard liquor for you.

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BITCH dis story featured now I do what I want!
You're not my real dad!

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To be fair... It's kinda true.

...Unless... Plot twist.

Well that's disturbing. There's no dark tag and its got ROM and comedy tags so perhaps iits going to work out somehow?

I see power has certainly gone to his head quickly.

Yay, Celestia is teaching him and he's learning!

Man I don't get anons desire to (apparently) control others. Unless your running some kind of time critical job like surgery or soldiering in the military you don't need to control others Just protect your boundaries and respect others.

I wonder what kind of line anons going to draw for himself regarding manipulation. It's a tool open to abuse.

Not much else to say for this except
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I need more booze, that's what i need right now.

She will teach him how to be more confident and to grow a backbone, but in return he must become her plaything.

Um... are these two things not... a little bit contradictory? :rainbowhuh: :derpytongue2:

6166251 Hmm...
Must mean she expects him to put the lessons to effect on her at some point.

Cool and first

6166095 That is why he is being trained.

You can give a guy a gun, training curbs the chances of abuse.

So Anon was speaking about being manipulated and manipulating others and how he needs to recognize when this type of thing is happening. Stating this, I know that he accepted her offer for help with being more confident and all that jazz but at the same time I don't think she is helping him so much as she is grooming him.

That being said so far Celestia almost seems to be that little angel/devil on his shoulder. Cover art also kinda helped with the image of this.

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Mh, could be. Still a damn risky strategy, to first destroy self-confidence and then build it up again like this...

6166740 fair point, and I imagine Celestia would bring him to account if he did.

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Heh, that would imply that Anon had any self-confidence in the first place.

Think about it... Celestia actually manipulated anon at the gala. She kissed him them lured him in to being her plaything!

hmmm the description sounds like it's the opposite of what my group is for , i take it the description is deceiving?.....

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There's some of both.

Comment posted by Arxsys deleted Jul 4th, 2015

psychology is a powerful thing

That wasn't half bad. I was expecting the usual drivel that pops up on here about BDSM, but I was rather surprised by the research or practical knowledge shown in this one.

Not that I'm a Dom or anything...honest...ish

Comment posted by mastermenthe deleted Jul 5th, 2015

Celestia would never be that forward

NEVER

6168573 *facepalm*
Which part from the tag ALTERNATE UNIVERSE you didnt understand?

6168885 no one appreciates sarcastic humor?

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Give a man a fish and he will eat for a day,
Teach a man to fish and he can eat for a while
Teach a man to care for the fish, and he can eat forever

6169335 I'm not sure how that saying applies to this situation.
What do you mean?

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I was genuinely hoping to hear that much. In all honesty, which I rarely use, thank you.

6169404 The specific words were a bit clinical IMO, but that's more of an individual D/s choice thing really. Each type of D/s is different. I'm a Primal Dom, which is different than a Daddy Dom, etc, etc.

All in all, fairly good and a sight better than most. Keep up the good work. :pinkiehappy:

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Ah yes. As you say, there are so many types, every dynamic is different. I am just pleased that someone appreciates that much.

dude so far it rocks

Before I read, will there be a sequel?

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No idea. That remains to be seen.

okay yeah, my butthole is clenching real hard right now. i'm interested in further chapters but i think it won't go/end well.

in your own yead.

head, probably.

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Thanks for pointing this out! I've fixed it.

This story had applicable life lessons. I thoroughly enjoyed this, Priest.

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