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SantaSam


Dishonored fan who just so happens to like mlp. And is a sadistic son of a bitch, and that's all I have got to say.

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Many years after the plauge, Corvo grows old and sadly passes to the other side... Or so you'd think and you would be correct if it wasn't for the fact that Corvo unlike most men was marked by the outsider, and he needs corvo to do something for him.


Dishonored and my little pony cross over.

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My problem is that the outsider is quite a planner he likes to watch and see what happens, he is not spiteful and always seems to do things that entertain him in the end. In this story he comes out as impulsive I don't really like that direction.

I'm just made him like this in the first chapter but in later one he'll go back to how he usually is.

"Ooooh I can through him a 'welcome to Equestria, please don't eat us party'

I believe you mean "throw"

What'cha mean, six

"Sis", you really should get an editor

For starters, this story was already done before. And done VERY badly.

Secondly, Celestia once survived a castle piercing blast to the chest and got back up. To say a human, even with powers, killing her, let alone discord or anyone else, is implausible, is an utter understatement.

And thirdly, and the breaker here, Luna falling for that is about as contrived bullshit as you can go for in these stories.

So we have an completely implausible plot, completely out of character behavior, and a plot so utterly contrived that it hurts. Corvo is dangerous to humans cause humans lack powers. Everything is equestria has powers.

Basiocally what you are trying to make us believe corvo could do is basically kill the equivalent of the outsider five times over........ Shakes head.

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I have a few problems with your comment that I'd like to point out.

First off, you took an extremely biased point of view and assumed multiple things, rather then looking at the facts.

First off, we next to nothing about The Outsider. You assumed that Celestia is undoubtedly stronger then the outsider. We know that the Outsider likes to mettle in the affairs of mortals because he sees it as one big show. We also know he is very old and can grant mortals magical powers. Those fee facts are not enough to automatically say that Princess Celestial is far stronger. I'm not saying the Outsider is stronger, nor am I saying Celestial is. We just need more facts before we go around saying either one.

You also seem to be forgetting about Corvo's intelligence and skill. Nothing is invincible, and with a clever plan, even a weaker can defeat a superior one.

My final point, and your most biased point, when does another stories quality ever have anything to do with this one?

6720340 Considering you did not actually read what i wrote, as i can clearly tell, you reply in invalid. But i shall explain.
For starters, i never said she was more powerful than the outsider. Albeit the outsider itself has shown no actaul powers outside of his own world, and giving the power of that world to mortals. you just pretended i did to try to invalidate my point.

More so, you forget that luna and celsetia are ALSO intelligent. And celestia has over a milennia of life experience, and has likely fought off and defeated numerous threats through her long life.
And more so, even if somehow a mortal of only a few decades is smarter than Celestia, the difference of power is indescribable. Corvo's powers are all about subtlety, as is most of these powers to begin with. Even at his strongest his powers are but parlor tricks to even weak unicorns.
And even if he can somehow avoid Celestia's magic, it would take only a single blow to either cripple or kill corvo. Cause she is also an earth pony.
And the worst part of it all is that she knows about time magic and it is more plausible to state that she would be able to detect and instantly dispel even that time stopping spell of his. Cause it is a spell that even mildly powerful ponies can use.

So i am using what ponies are capable of in comparison to corvo, and it seems he is weaker than even a normal unicorn in the majority of respects. He can't even levitate objects at will nor project energy.

Also you are brushing over the bullshit idea that luna would jsut GO evil again like that. That is just stupid.

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I really think you have little idea what you are talking about when it comes to The Outsider. I've played the Brigmore witches DLC. The Outsider is shown to have the ability to stop time in a large section of Dunwall, meaning that he obviously can effect the mortal world.

He also has complete control of the void's energy. We literally have no idea how powerful the Outsider truly is. Not to mention that fact that the Outsider has over 4000 years of experience that he could be lending Corvo, versus Celestia's 1000. Despite that, we still know little about the Outsider. He might actually be quite weak in comparison to the Royal Sisters.

Once again, you seem to be assuming things. I never said either if the princesses weren't intelligent. If done cleverly enough, Corvo could still defeat them. I'm going to have to pull an outside reference for this. If you've ever read the Inheritance Cycle, then you'll know who King Galbatorix is. He could literally control magic itself, bending any and every spell to his will with a single word, and yet, despite Galbatorix's near omnipotence, Eragon defeated him.

It just goes to show that nothing is truly invincible. Obviously, Celestial won't be defeated by shear force. But in a clever and thoughtful way.

Also, I didn't gloss over those last points. My comment was what I thought was wrong with your comment. If I hadn't agreed I would have pointed it out.

And I will quote directly from your post to prove that I did read it, "Basiocally what you are trying to make us believe corvo could do is basically kill the equivalent of the outsider five times over"

Is that not saying that Princess Celestial is five times stronger than the Outsider?

So no, I am not pulling non-existant sentences out of your posts just to try and get my point across (Even when you seem to be doing this). And yes, I have read both your posts through multiple times.

Luna wasn't tricked in any way she was already Nightmare moon from the start, so there goes your third point.

And then your point about Discord, and this is spoilers here, is that the Outsider himself will help with this.

And in my story the Outsider took all three of them working until unconscious to even attempt to imprison him, and they failed. So you tell me if in my story Celestia is more powerful then the Outsider.

Also I've never seen a unicorn be able to summon a massive swarm of rats out of nothing nor have I seen one be able to stop time, go backwards and forwards in time yes, but stop no. And Celestia wouldn't be able to dispel STOP time because she would be frozen in time slow time properly because she can still move and another thing no pony has ever been able turn into mist, we have never seen and proof of this, as well as the new ability Erosion that breaks down ANYthing, so yes Celestia can survive a fall through stone but can she survive having her stomach among other organs on the floor, doesn't matter about magical shielding either they melt too, and this starts with a touch when the power is being used and if upgraded it doesn't stop. He also has Dauds blink which stops time.

side note: Corvo will only be using stop time to escape NOT harm

Not sure if anyone else noticed massive amounts of errors, still gonna thumbs up cuz Corvo :moustache:

Comment posted by Whodafuq146 deleted Jun 7th, 2017

6350062 heh I guess he could but it is funny what pinkie said

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