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After discovering King Sombra planning his latest scheme in their clubhouse, the Cutie Mark Crusaders soon learn they have a lot more in common with the tyrannical King than they might've thought.
Can two groups of blank flanks get along long enough for all of them to succeed? Or will Sombra's need for revenge instead lead all of Ponyville to ruin?
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Please, sir, might we have some more? There are not enough good Sombra fics...
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MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!? You want, MORE, adorability? You want MORE sugary evilness? You want MORE stale cookies of surely prophetic doominess?
So do I.
Cool.
*Faved*
6141963
Agreed! Natural Born Derpy here, makes THE BEST Sombra Fics.
One suggestion. MORE BLOOD!!!!!!
Plus add at least one Sombra X CMC ship
I'm looking forward to where this go's.
Great contrast here. "The power of friendship compels you", ha.
OOOoohhh another Sombra fic writen by naturalbornderpy
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i absolutly need
to read this
6143284 Yes. Yes you do.
6142564 I'm still surprised no one's tried a villain exorcism before. One on Discord would be awesome.
6142146 I can give you one of those things.
6142018 Awe. Thank you! Would you believe the first few stories I wrote for this site had a villain Sombra that actually went around and mutilated ponies for fun?
I've... obviously changed a bit since then.
6141963 Working on it!
Boop. Oh dear lord it`s the end of the world!!!!
6144755 Always be careful who you boop. Could end up setting the whole town on fire.
6145486 Um... Right. I never booped Celestia... And made canterlot com-bust in flames... Heh... That was Luna...
Oh no
You have Sombra addiction
6145980 Point being?
Couldn't resist.
6147693 And here I was going for an exorcism by way of cuddles feel. Oh, well...
Oh my gosh. Well... that was cute.
He does make a good case for being a villian.
And no bedtime? That is enticing.
If you want a comedic Braytish name?
Bloody Loo.
Man, Scootaloo really doesn't lend itself to good villainous puns. I've been trying for a while now and I've got zip. The only thing I could think of was go the fandom route and give her a chicken pun name. We'd all get the little inside joke, and maybe you could make a whole comedic scene out of it. Like Sombra is secretly really scared of chickens (some trauma in his backstory maybe) so he thinks a chicken based name is fittingly evil, but Scoots hates it so you could have some nice banter as they argue and he tells her to think of something better but he shoots down all her ideas. Maybe even make a running gag out of it where she keeps yelling at him to stop calling her that. Might want to save it as a last resort though in case no one else can think of a good Scootapun.
He is becoming self aware.... Can't wait to see the dastardly lemonade plan come into play!
Every
Villain
Is
Lemons
You just earned a favorite.
Ok, now names. Shoot-an'-loot? Pony Grinder? The Penguin?
Wait, selling lemonade on a hot day? Those evil brutes they will sell it highly above its marketed price and we will be forced to buy it because it is still cheaper than the stuff in the stores and all the water fountains are out of service!
I like this Sombra. He is a scholar and gentlestallion after my own lack of heart.
Also, this is why Sweetie is Best Crusader.
The last scene at the end with Twilight was priceless1
Alt name: How to be a Mary Sue. Also, poor Scootaloo.
This quote reminded me of a friend who constantly got sand in his ass whenever we went to the beach. His nickname from that day forth became Sandy Cheeks, and now their cheeks are full of sand.
Three staches
And a wonderful arc of lemonade these chapters shall be! Thank you!
Rarity is quite the responsible sibling, isn't she? Nice chapter, especially the way Sombra helped the CMC defeat the FlimFlam brothers through sweeter lemonade and intimidation.
Oh dear. Nice work there, Rarity.
That wasn't very nice what he did to Flim and Flam.
Yes, Old Country Time Lemonade is vile stuff, but no one makes you buy it.
Is this foreshadowing for a sudden twist from silly comedy to a tragic backstory that's really sad?
Featured!
6147693 And his heart grew three sizes that day, making half his internal veins explode due to massive increase in blood volume, killing him in mere seconds.
Sombra spiked the lemonade. That fillies are selling. Wow.
Headcanon accepted, Flam constantly worries about his brother stealing his mustache.
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(My editor's favorite joke thus far... for some reason.)
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6206533 I know, right? Sombra's doing a lot better than he used to.
6206088 Cool!
And I totally missed it!
6206046 What? Nah. Me doing something like that? I've only twisted around friendly comedies into pitch black despair tales twice so far. Would I really do that again?
6205934 They had it coming.
6205904 The sweet taste of victory. Almost as sweet as ice cold lemonade.
Thanks for reading!
6209411 For me, it's a really tight contest between this joke and Twilight's attendance fetish. Oh, how I hope Sombra hurls a quesadilla at her in the future!
Why did I try to hold off reading this until the weekend?
Once again you literally had me laughing out loud. Every single chapter.
I'm seriously enjoying watching Sombra teach every pony the Magic of Fiendship.
You've got another winner here my friend.
This is awesome
6212542 Thank you! Glad you're enjoying.
Nocturne, eh? Is it Sombra's little sister, lover, or maybe best friend? Well, whoever she is, I'm betting on the Little Sister. Because, obviously, Imouto is best imouto.
6218641 Sombra's little sister.
My god, does that sound cute. "What did you do this weekend, big brother?" "Enslaved a race." "Oh, can I meet them?" "Sure, I guess. It's not like they're going anywhere. They're like... chained to a wall." 
Ummm, sorry, I haven't been a proper kid since 1997, so I can only reference that time and before hand that as an U.S. citizen I personally have not heard of the trampoline game Popcorn.
Does sound fun though...
I love this story. The trampoline scene made it for me.
I'm pretty sure the CMC were going to lead Ponyville ro ruin anyway.
Hey, that's in my ideas book! I have a scene where Pinkie flicks evil Twilight with rainbow juice shouting "the magic of Friendship compels you" because she can't use the elements without Twilight. When that doesn't work Rainbow Dash just points out her massive brain to the zombie army Twilight summoned and they turn on her.
Great minds think alike I guess.
That Twilight scene was hilarious.
*reads*
Eeyup, still hilarious.
We played 'crack the egg'. Same game, though. roundstable.com/forums/images/smilies/flutterhooray.gif
Also I tried to upvote again after this chapter.