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aDerangedBrony
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wow, and this is just the prologue
I'm a terrible person. I laughed when you mentioned genocide. sigh. Have my like.
628855 Heh, I was originally just going to make this the whole thing, but as I planned it out I couldn't help but consider what the ponies would do after the event. The "after" eventually became much more interesting to me, and I knew it would be too deep and detailed to just be a sequel, so this lot got pushed back tot he prologue.
Oh yes, when things get out of hand, darkness reigns. Now, I couldn't imagine canon Pinkie being so angry at the Dogs; she wouldn't forgive them, but she wouldn't become murderous in response, either, especially not in such a bad state... but, on another hand, I have no idea what she would do.
Getting drunk at her desk makes my mind think that Rainbow is a gritty Private Eye or something.
635613 That awkward moment when you think of a better idea once the chapter's already been uploaded. A noir monologue would've been epic!
Actually that wouldn't have fit at all. Still would've been cool, though :
And now, Pinkie is broken. Mmmm-hmm.
642368 *AMBIGUOUS, SMALL SPOILERS*
All the ponies are broken, they just deal with it in different ways. In the next chapter we see how RD is broken
*/spoilers*
642674 Of course, I'd inferred that, but she seems to have taken it to an extreme, her entire Element having been almost completely drained.
642707 Oh, good. Wasn't sure how obvious I needed to make it for people to see that. I mean, no matter how vague I describe something, it would make sense to ME because it's already in my head. I guess it's a matter of writing in sufficient detail while avoiding pointless, boring exposition. Hopefully the feedback in the comments will give me an idea of how it's going.
God I love that face.
my god, what have you started and why cant i stop reading.? have a like.
Hey guys, you should probably give me more feedback.
Uh oh.
811707 Yea, you see where this is going.
812109 Sorry for not keeping up. I will from now on, and try to provide at least limited feedback as more chapters come out, because you seem to be severely lacking in feedback. And, no writer should be without feedback.
812122 Yea, it's kind of annoying: I see people get TONNES of feedback on other fics but this one... not so much. I don't take criticism well but I definitely need it, lol. Don't apologize for not keeping up; I haven't been keeping up with the updates as much as I wanted either.
this is an interesting story and it is well written
I hope it ends well
"Pills here!"
Still neat, keep it comin'.
858644 I'll probably put up the next chapter in a few hours. I'm really not happy with it, but it's kind of necessarily to the plot so I can't scrap it and I can't find a way to make it better.
Trippin' Rainbow. That is all. Remember that species, i.e. human, pegasus, unicorn are not to be proper nouns unless part of a title.
I'm agreeing with Twilight on that one. Borked. So broken that the word describing it is too.
902455 902431 Well, damn. I'm getting sloppy! Thanks for pointing that out btw.
902455 Dammit, I cannot find "borked".
I'll find it later.
903263 Oh no, it's not in there, I just put that there for comedic purposes, sorry.
903566 Oh. My bad, lol.
So some ponies drown their sorrows in pills, some in booze or religion, and some in cupcakes?
936552 Well... Yep. That's pretty much the entirety of the story
Wish Granted!
Gah, I hate it when a random ship comes in the middle of a good story.
It didn't click in my head the first time I read this story, but, where as ponies do not have hands, I would think that the society would have been called "The Hoof".
After all, the hand is a distinctly human thing...
Twilight.... :'(
*crying*
I knew she'd come around
lol
I find the mane six's treatment of pinkie disgusting. i like to see them get fucking raped by dogs and see how they feel about it! fuck
i hope you all die a painful death. that isnt how you treat your friends when they suffer truama i dont care if she trying to kill you its called getting her help yeah that actually exists! sorry this story really angers me everyone was so insensitive to pinkie in this.
I believe the hardest part of writing is in the first few paragraphs. That's when you want to hook the reader in, and I must say. YOU HAD ME HOOKED AT THE START! I love these twisted dark fics! Not many people can do them justice and you do it great! I can't wait to finish this story!
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even when pinkie got raped and her friends didnt give a fuck so they beat her up anyway even though she was already emotionally scarred from being raped and beaten by diamond dogs yeah they are such good friends aren't they? this story is fucked up and i dont mind that its a good story i just dont like the idea of beating up a rape victim instead of getting them the help they need.