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Joined May 2012
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Just a writer who lives in a small apartment in New York City.  

Stories (3)

  • The Envelope
    Lyra figures it all out.

    2,489 words · 2,908 views · 285 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Left Behind
    Rainbow Dash needs to show Applejack that she is just as special as her friends.
    23,577 words · 3,894 views · 340 likes · 7 dislikes
  • Material
    Rarity and Rainbow Dash: A romantic pairing so odd that even they don't get it.
    3,637 words · 2,396 views · 185 likes · 8 dislikes

Blog Posts (4)

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Finally finished!  As her friends find success, Applejack begins to worry that her life as a simple farmer makes her the least special of her friends.  Rainbow Dash comes up with a plan to show her just how special she is- and discovers something about her feelings for the country farmer in the process.

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My first story!  Please let me know what you think!  Chapters will be added once every three days without fail.

Edited by Clavier

Cover Image by [http://derpiihooves.deviantart.com/]Derpii Hooves[/url]  

First Published
21st May 2012
Last Modified
12th Jun 2012

Comments ( 168 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

I have had those feelings of jealousy before it hurts:pinkiesad2:

This is a story i can get behind keep it up:pinkiehappy:

#2 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627363

Thank you so much, 501st, I will!  

#3 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627410

when might i expect updates? weekly, daily, or whenever you get around to it?

#4 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627418

I'll be updating this story a few times per week.  You can expect a chapter in the next few days!

#5 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627436

Good to hear:scootangel:

#6 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

I love this story! Great characterization, a sweet story, I might just have a new favorite AppleDash fic. Keep going!

(I always love AJ and Dash teasing each other. Great job on that.)

(Edit to add: Ignore the haters. There are people who thumbs down every ship fic, or every AppleDash fic or something. All I know is that mine always get a few thumbs down, then a bunch of thumbs up. Strangely, my gen fic gets no thumbs down.)

#7 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

Wow, this is really good so far! Like some others said, great characterization, and an interesting idea that I could actually see happening. Plus, Appledash. Can't go wrong with that :derpytongue2: Keep up the great work, I'm definitely gonna look out for more of this

#8 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627474

Oh, thank you for telling me that!  I was wondering why I was getting so many "thumbs down" so fast, I was worried.  

I'm glad you liked it!

#9 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>627493

Thank you, Ladyhart.  I think I have some good ideas for the story, I hope you like where it goes!

#10 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

Yay for Appedash

#11 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

I hadn't realized it was just the one chapter up so far. :ajsleepy:

I'm liking this. Not only as a sucker for shipping, but it feels nice. It feels like it could lead into a well rounded situation, not something entirely shaded one direction or another.  :ajsleepy::ajsleepy: Is nice.

#12 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>629102

Sorry to trick you, ambion!  Don't worry, I'm already starting on the next chapter as we speak, so you won't have to wait too long.  I'm glad you like it!

#13 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

This definitely has potential.  I'll be watching :scootangel:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

I will be most certainly be keeping an eye on this.

#15 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

>>629356

>>629377

Thanks for following, guys!

#16 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 2d ago · · ·

Interesting...

I can't believe no one is commenting about the plan.

Rd will try to run the farm? XD

#17 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 1d ago · · ·

Your characterization is spot-on, and your dialogue is excellent. The pacing is also pitch-perfect, so the story flows naturally; it doesn't feel like you're rushing anything, nor does it feel like you're lingering too long. I'll definitely keep an eye on this one.

#18 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 1d ago · · ·

>>630928

Thank you for the kind review, De Carabas.  

#19 · Chapter 1 · 113w, 1d ago · · ·

>>630072

You'll see!

#21 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

I have been writing sad stuff all day, and I needed this like you wouldn't believe!

That was hilarious. Great job! :rainbowlaugh:

#22 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

>>641534

I'm so glad it cheered you up, Bookplayer!  I'm didn't know it was going to be so silly, but I liked how it turned out.

#23 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

It's decided, I'm definitely watching you. :pinkiehappy:

Seriously, I love this story and the characterisation felt spot-on to me.

#24 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

>>641618

Thank you, Lone Ranger.  I'm glad you liked my characterization, I worked hard on getting it right!

#25 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

This was adorable! and sweet jesus did it make me laugh... I love the story! Keep up the good work! :ajsmug:

#26 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

>>641906

I'm glad you liked it!  So what do you think, should I add a "comedy" tag to the story...?

#27 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

Oh shit son!

>>641929

ADD THAT TAG NAOW

:3

#28 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

>>641929

Most definitely homie!

#29 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·
#30 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 6d ago · · ·

Are we to be expecting some rainbowjack or appledash?:rainbowhuh:

#31 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 5d ago · · ·

>>643796

Well I don't want to give anything away, but... probably.

#32 · Chapter 2 · 112w, 5d ago · · ·

Another awesome chapter! I'm really liking this so far, and your characterization is really accurate. Can't wait for more, keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:

#33 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

Faaaaantastic!!!

#34 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>649416

Glad you like it, Trinary.  Thanks!

#35 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

As always, perfect. Poor Dash, I just want to read more right away so that I know it gets better.

Keep up the great work!

#36 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>647395

Can't wait for more?  *poof*  Well here's another chapter!

#37 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

All is as expected:pinkiehappy:

#38 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>649481

Don't worry... I have a feeling it will get better.  But we have to get to the "Adventure" part of the story first!

#39 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>649504

Didn't have to wait long for your Appledash part of the story!  

#40 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>649512

Thought it was gonna progess through the story and she confesses feelings for her toward the end but still great job:scootangel:

#41 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh wow, this is shaping up quite nicely. Love how you're handling slightly-in-the-future head's-just-a-little-bit-bigger-than-it's-always-been Rainbow Dash. Very true to the spirit of her character.

You could probably use a good editor though. There are a few minor stumbles, like miscapitalizations and such.

#42 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

No! NOOOO! After all that?!       You must upload more. You must, you must!  I need to know what happens!

#43 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 4d ago · · ·

>>650219

New Chapter once every three days!  

#44 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 2d ago · · ·

Gah! Cliffhanger! I'm glad you update quickly. Super awesome job, yet again. I actually leaned closer to my computer screen in apprehension at AJ's reaction, until I realized what I was doing and laughed :derpytongue2: keep it up :pinkiehappy:

#45 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 2d ago · · ·

>>659206

Glad you liked it.  You can expect a chapter to be sent in sometime tomorrow!

#46 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 2d ago · · ·

I really love this story becauso its so different besides the other appledashfics =)

Cant wait for the next chapter!

#47 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 2d ago · · ·

>>661178

I really love this story becauso its so different

:)

besides the other appledashfics =)

:(

Edit: :)

#48 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 1d ago · · ·

>>662148

Why the sad Face?

Its a good thing that the story has a completly other plot than other Fics, it a reason why i love this:rainbowkiss:

English is not my first language and a make a lot of grammatical and spelling errors, so maybe you misunderstood something.... ;)

#49 · Chapter 3 · 112w, 1d ago · · ·

>>663550

Oh, I'm sorry, it sounded like you were saying "it's so different, but it's not at all different from other appledash fics" which sort of made it sound sarcastic.  I'm glad you like it, I misunderstood!

#50 · Chapter 4 · 112w, 1d ago · · ·

Just amazing. The black dragon is awesome, and I LOVED AJ talking to Big Mac.

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