♪we'll have a battle!we'll go all in it!let's have a battle!bath!Battle!battle of the bands.♪
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After the battle of the bands adagio reliazes that she likes sunset shimmer not as a friend as a girl friend and trying to hide these emotions from her is hard!adagio realizes that if she wants to be with sunset she has to disconnect from her evil ways
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I like it so far, keep going with that
6130720 ok^^thankies
This story was Pretty good! Like.
6163230 aww yay thankies^^
You forget --->…............
6168287 were did I forget it?
It's a good story, but it's in desperate need of a good polishing. Would I be able to get your permission to proof-read and edit it?
6174126 yes you can proof read and edit it,go ahead
"OK,um I'm gonna go talk to
Sundagio...I mean Sunset
shimmer!"
That had be laughing proper hard during silent class doing maths,everypony turns and asks if I'm alright but I'm sitting there dying of laughter(also please get and editor or at least use a spell-checker
This was a really nice story it had me laughing and smiling a lot apart from the grammar and spelling great work /)
6225337 thankyou :D
6225169 thanks XD and I actually have a editor now
Very nice. I liike it
6230740 thanks^^
Not to be mean, but did you ever consider an editor?
Lines cracked in the Dazzlings.
What Aria needs is Bunny Therapy.
*epic facepalm*
You know what will be shocking?
6472845 I'll bite. What?
Erm... okay, I'm going to be polite here... Spelling is everywhere, and it's like you copy and pasted the same two paragraphs one after the other... and there's way too much punctuation in points, and too little in others... But it's fine otherwise.
The definition of cringe I need to edit this, but it's cringey in the first two words I literally already found a spelling error.
Wat?
It hurt my head when I read this. 
But beside that it pretty good
The concept was good. The grammar could be worked on and the rolling eyes will haunt me forever. All in all everything was alright. Keep up the good work.
Please, PLEASE pay attention to you spelling errors! They are quite destructing. I’m sorry, I don’t usually complain, but I it just bothered me. Just a heads that’s all.