Have not read...and so i wont vote up/down...but from what I've seen in the description...all I can say is this.  Wat

Seems like a good story, but its a bit rushed

Man this is really rushed!

That's too rushed.

A few spelling mistakes here and there.

It's mainly dialogue.

Describe the character and surroundings a bit more?

Like what was Fluttershy's reaction when she got turned into an alicorn?

Why is the main character turning the elements of harmony into alicorns, so far there has been no explanation.

So I'm sorry, I have to thumb this down. I am interested in the story line, however, but hope you improve the story as you write on?

I'll try to make it better. The 8 down thumbs entitle me to. I don't mind Skyler. you told me what I have to improve and I am thankful for that. >>687554687554 And Carbon, I know it is rushed.

by THE WAY, THANK YOU FOR RATING! I don't care if you give me thumbs down because I'm not that needy!

Sorry for double post, I ment a different one for each chapter. Thanks though for seeing what should be fixed. I know you'll do your best to improve this story! It seems extremely interesting. I wish i could see Berry Punch's reaction when she wakes up

>>689695689695 i SORT OF TOLD YOU. WE AREN'T GOING TO PUT HER BACK IN, BUT IF YOU WANT I WOULD MAKE SOMETHING RIDICULOUS HAPPEN INCLUDING BERRY PUNCH ALICORN OF WINE.

Edit: Also, I got the inspirtation from a picture as well.

Wait a minute. Who liked this? I didn't even finish the chapter and someone added a like. Do you think a glitch occured? I was disliking it to make my quality upping slightly more urgent. Then another like was added. Can a maker of a story dislike their own story?

>>689744689744 Wow, very sorry.... And yeah I know that you said you weren't going to use her again, but it would be funny if she was doing something crazy in the background while the main story goes on. And also, that like was mine. I really did like the story and what (I think) would happen. And I also trusted you that you would fix the story so it's not so rushed.

>>687289687289 vOTE DOWN.

Way to kill all interest right off the bat.

At least the description gave me a heads up so I could mark it off and walk away from it... Maybe one day, Berry, maybe one day...

>>754699754699 I actually put her back in in chapter 3.

I love listening to songs when I'm working Because it accelerates my typing. Here listen to this

One of my better Chapter names, but sadly probably not one of my better chapters.

dude...BEST. CHAPTER. YET!

>>947905947905 This is a very rare occurance. You found my old story. I must ask you to refrain your excitement, for I am not forseen to update this for a while.

>>948042948042 sorry dude. dont be grumpy

>>948049948049 Ah aint grumpy. Ahm just overheating.