Rainbow Dash brings along a few bottles of cider when she's meeting Fluttershy to practice and show off her new tricks. Apparently the cider has been sitting in the sun for a bit too long and provokes a strange change in Fluttershy's behavior. After a sudden revelation, both pegasi need to get their thoughts and hearts to agree, or their friendship is at risk.
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you see after cider sits in the sun for a while cider begins to ferment and have a strong taste to it making alcohol
A good start! I shall follow this with interest.
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I'm subscribing to other peoles' headcanon regardin alcohol for the duration of this fic.
That'll be elaborated on in the next chapter
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Thanks! I'm in the middle of exam week, but I've got the scaffolding of the next chapter ready. It'll probably be up during the weekend at the latest.
This is really well done, I'm watching this one intently.
I'll be interested to see how RD can rationalize having her... ahem, encounter with Fluttershy while Flutters was clearly drunk. Without context it seems kind of like taking advantage on Dash's part. This could get interesting.
Interesting. I shall watch this.
well done
that is all
except that
and that
ect.
amazing!
track'd
ohoho. This should be good.
Oh jeez, this is good so far!
So far this is very promising!
Thank you, too! It's nice to see that Rainbow Dash would indeed be excited, though professional, around the Wonderbolts and not some romantic-seeking fangirl! Now that's more in-character.
Well done! Keep up the good work.
good goood *insert evil emperor palpatine*
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Whoops, I forgot to reply here when I posted the second chapter. If you've read it, you can see I have addressed your concerns. There's still the problem that Fluttershy has no idea. We'll be getting to that later.
653489 You sneaky person...
That was cleverly done. I can see a massive awkward-bomb conversation incoming, sometime soon. This is gonna be good.
The only issue I ever have with a good Flutterdash fic is my impatience with the next update.
This is gold and I have rated it with my love. Stay awesome!
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Haha, no need for much more patience this time around. Approximately half of the next chapter is written.
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Huzzah! An update!
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Yeah... I've had it there for a while without remembering to click publish...
I checked the story for something unrelated today and noticed the red light... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
HO MY F--KING GOD.
I thought you were DEAD. I'm shell-shocked. I'm amazed. I'm...........ECSTATIC!
I will read!
As I read all of the verbally-spoken lines, I added the word "potatoes" at the end.
YES IT'S A FUN THING TO DO!
WOO HOO AN UPDATE!
The wait was killing me!
FlutterDash
Ok. To give it a proper evaluation...
Must. Have. More.
YAY FOR UPDATE!
This chapter ended so cutely. (is cutely a word?) Write on good author! 
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If cutely isn't a word, then it damn well should be.
The next chapter won't be quite as cute if I ever get it written up... Avast, awkwardness to the starboard bow!
the last update was in 18 nov 2012? :( well that's bad, this story is kind of interesting, but its been more than a year so i guess you won't be updating again, or am i wrong?
Well that's sad it's a dead fic :(