Author notes- This is the last chapter I'm doing for this so I can see how much people like it so far, if it doesn't do so well, no point in continuing.
The mysterious lightning stallion woke up in a hospital bed, the walls were white, and there were six ponies standing around him. He mumbled a little bit, and he still couldn't hear much. After a few minutes, he was aware enough of his surroundings that he could speak. He smiled weakly and spoke, "I made it..." Everypony stared at him oddly. "What?" Flutter Shy asked confused. "Did he say he 'made it'?" Rainbow Dash spoke up. "What the hay does that mean?" The stallion had a somewhat deep voice, and responded. "Twilight Sparkle, Apple Jack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Flutter Shy, and Rainbow Dash. I know you all. I know you may think I sound crazy, but I'm not from this world." Everypony stood dumbfounded in the room. But Twilight walked closer to him. "Did you say you don't belong to this world?" He nodded, "That's correct. I come from a place called Earth, from a different dimension then this one." By then they all wanted answers. "What do you mean?" "Are you gonna eat our brains?" "Your people are gonna kill us aren't they?!" The stallion chuckled, "Allow me to explain..." He went on to explain the concept of MLP:FiM and bronies in his world. He had been working on a portal into this world for a while, but he hadn't expected to enter like he did. The ponies were a little more relaxed, but still confused. "I suppose I shouldn't use my human name while in this form..." Twilight smiled and said, "How about Lightning?" She pointed to his cutie mark. "Huh, I didn't even notice that. Sure, lets go with Lightning."
Celestia and Luna were having an other one of their more common fights. "We need to do this!" Luna was yelling. "No, it's to dangerous! We are NOT going to try and find more worlds to inhabit!" Luna was furious, "But our population is growing, and our amount of land is shrinking, we need to find more space!" Celestia was trying to stay as calm as she could, but her sister was so ignorant. "I promises I will think of something, but we aren't going to be looking through other worlds for the solution!" At that moment, Cadence ran it. "Luna, I have just received knowledge that a space portal has just been opened, and something has come through it." Luna had put her in charge of monitoring Equestria for any possibilities that an opening to an other world was available. Celestia had agreed to this, but rather resentfully. Celestia and Luna stopped in mid argument and looked up. Luna was smiling, but Celestia looked rather frightened. "It opened above Ponyville, but it looks like it has closed now." Luna's smile diminished a bit, but then something occurred to her. "Didn't you say something came through it?" Cadence shook her head. "I'm not sure, it appeared that something did, but I can't be to sure. Why don't you go check it out?" Celestia face-hoofed, and Luna was up already, "Get a chariot, we're heading to Ponyville!" She looked over at her sister. "Are you coming?" Celestia glared at Luna, but after much thought, she stepped up beside her sister.
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Yeah, I was thinking that was weird, but I didn't bother to remove it because I wanted to see how it did :/ This whole thing is an experiment to see what I can do good and what I can do wrong.
Yep, looks like this is cancelled. Sorry to the one or two of you who actually liked it. Maybe I'll try writing something else, who knows.







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