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nick12212


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Skyler Guardian is moving to ponyville for a change of pace from his Manehattan lifestyle.

Follow him in his various antics as he settles in to his new life.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )

Honestly, I'm hoping this is a trollfic. Is you're OC red and black as well?

6116373
No he is my buddy's oc and only his hair and tail is red and black. His body is blue

6116373
So be honest with me, why do you hope this is a trollfic? Is it really that bad? I'm always open to suggestions to make it better

First off, the name. 'Guardian' immediately gives people a bad vibe. People think it's gonna be another story where he finds out he is the seventh element. Gets unproportionately angry and beats the crap out of every one who has ever been mean to fluttershy. The story has a basis to be good. But the description sounds like the clichéd stories that sometimes appear from time to time

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Maybe I could rethink the last name. Any other advice on it?

Yeah. Just keep up the good work. Honestly, the chapter is just so good. My only problem was the fact that people may read the description and be discouraged from reading it. Again, this story has great potential to be a staplehold of Fimfiction. Like My Little Dashie. Well done

6116373
To be fair, when I first saw this story, I warned him about the black-and-red design. He went with it anyway.

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Its my friends oc. I couldn't really ask him to change it :/

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Thanks! You know that actually gives me a lot of confidence.

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