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When you lose who you are, what will you do to become yourself again?
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When The Wind Changes
Discord is free again, but this time some changes occured.
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Xenophobia
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In The Closet
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Did You Miss Me
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Steve Irwin Vs. Equestria
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Rainfall
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These Crooked Eyes by Symphony

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Through these crooked eyes, I can see through your disguise.

PICTURE BY DIAB0LICAL

First Published
21st May 2012

Last Modified
21st May 2012

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Symphony

#1 · 52w, 4d ago ·

So, this is when I hide beneath my bed and cover my ears, waiting for the storm to blow over, right?

SkylerM

#2 · 52w, 4d ago ·

This seems more like dark than sad. :derpyderp1:

Nightmare

#3 · 52w, 4d ago ·

Saaaaad We Don't Like Saaad

N00813

#4 · 52w, 4d ago ·

I spotted a few areas where shorter sentences would have a stronger effect.

Other than that, this was very good.

I particularly like the poem structure spliced into the story.

Fury of the Tempest

#5 · 52w, 4d ago ·

More dark then sad...

And Dash might be a jerk at times but you've made her WAY meaner then she is... and I don't like that, through the story cocept is good.

Symphony

#6 · 52w, 4d ago ·

>>625494625494

>>625719625719

Changed the tag.

Poniard Dagger

#7 · 52w, 4d ago ·

Image: http://media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lxvhxhUhqR1qgggex.gif

just thought i'd let you know

Fury of the Tempest

#8 · 52w, 4d ago ·

>>625752625752

I wonder what other Bronies might say about the change.

Symphony

#9 · 52w, 4d ago ·

>>625797625797

They can say mostly whatever they want, but I as the author changed the tag so it would fit better to the fic itself.

Fury of the Tempest

#10 · 52w, 4d ago ·

>>625805625805

Though it could seem to be done because of the comments of a few.

#11 · 52w, 4d ago ·

:derpytongue2:

Zytharros

#12 · 52w, 3d ago ·

Huh... Coincidence that TFK's "Step To Me" played as I read?

Bullies suck. Unfortunately, some people will crack and kill or at least lose it under the pressure. You never know who will.

I can't say I liked nor disliked this, nor can I favourite it.

It's a good piece of literature, anyway.

derpdragon

#13 · 35w, 3d ago ·

Wow. I give thumbs up and smiling pinkie :pinkiehappy: . Derpy givin some payback baby!!!!

TheHylianBatman

#14 · 32w, 5d ago ·

So... :derpytongue2: becomes :pinkiecrazy: , and kills those who made fun of her, save for :rainbowhuh: , who now looks like .

I like it. FAV FOR YOU!

Canterlot Ninja

#15 · 32w, 1d ago ·

Dislike on the simple fact that you've changed Derpy's personality to an extent that is no longer believable. Derpy going all RAGE MODE on other ponies? Sorry, she's too good for that.

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