Good start lets see how it goes.

This is going to be great fun. I'm looking forward to some next chapters.

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Sparity and your not making Discord into some kinda blood thirsty evil monster. Sounds like a must read to me!

"seance" should be since

"Encased in stone what eales is new?" eales should be else

Discord like all names needs to be capped every single time.

"It’s right on the tip of my tough" should be tongue

"the thought made Celeastia worried so she slammed the door open to cache her little sister in the act " three errors this time the thought worried Celestia (you messed her name up a number of times actually) and cache should be catch

Add a extra enter after every paragraph and indent every paragraphs and it'll look 1000 times nicer. Love the concept but I suggest finding proofreader to assist you. Try here Looking for Editors Group

Must. See. More.

This was pretty good. I'd like to see more.

P.S. I can’t spell for shit

At least you're honest and I respect that. You get a lot of writers who think their shit don't stink and never admit when they have short comings. You keep it real and for that I'm gonna track this fic not just because it's a Discord fic, but because you keeps it real. Your spelling is mediocre and your like a honey badger, you don't give a damn.

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Peace Out Dude.  

Im 8 hundred words into the next ch.  So i hope to have something up by tonight or tomorrow.  

Sneak peek;  in come some OCs

Damn you authors and your cliffhangers!

Cliffhangers nooooooo.....

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Silly Twilight some of the best stuff is invented by accident like vulcanized rubber, Teflon, and super glue. Plus all those books had to come from somewhere.

I can't spell well either, but I'm willing to revise it for you

This is a chimera

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Heads of a goat, a dragon, and a lion, with a snake tail.

This is a manticore

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Head and body of a lion, bat wings, and a scorpion tail.

Just putting this up, in case you meant to put manticore, because someone mixed up chimera and manticore, and I don't want the same to happen to you, so this is here for reference.

For me the chimera is a term meaning animal with parts from diffrent species. Ex.  Fullmetal alchemist has many diffrent chimeras. I didn't specifi the type of chimera so u can use your imagination if you want.