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Here is all my opinions on every shipping. Warning: Your probably going to be offended. Probably. Just remember one thing before you post a hate message to me. Love and Tolerance. And no I do not copy that other guy's fanfic. I am simply stating what I think.
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Oh boy, more meta fics.
Hmmm, well to start with... MAY THE FANFICTION GODS HAVE MERCY ON YOUR SOUUUUUUL.
Ok, know that's out of the way. It was nice that you gave us your opinion and the fact you believe in it is very respectable buttttt.
To be honest it's the fact that RD and AJ would argue and be competitive towards each other that leads us to believe that they would be good together, well that and a whole bunch of other things i'm to lazy to type up. I liked it because I like people stating their own opinions.
p.s I wont be surprised if this ends up on the featured box
MOAR PL0X? p.s prepare for the H@TERS!!!
624935 LOOKS LIKE A SHIT STORMS A' BREWIN
I can't wait to see what you do for MacinDash. I hope It's positive.
Shipfics may be tedious, bland, stale, and overdone, but bashfics are just the same. I hate to say it, mate, but this is pretty much the same thing 'cept on the opposite side of the spectrum. Ruined characterization (Rainbow Dash may be a selfish bitch, but there is a line between mean-spirited and cruelty), self-serving mentality (I feel like you're trying to MAKE people agree with you due to that last line before the fic. "You'll see for yourself." I see something alright), and signs of botched spelling and grammar.
Also, you apparently forget that no relationship is perfect, mate. I noted that you used their arguing as the basis for why the pairing wouldn't work. I couldn't really care less about you hating the pairing, but from a realistic point of view, a non-arguing couple is worse. They know nothing of compromise and are unable to work on such a skill, thus one partner ends up giving too much and it leads to a very unhappy relationship. Yes, arguing can still ruin a relationship (if cruelty is involved, like the uncharacteristic cruelty shown by Dash), but it can also strengthen the bonds of said relationship tenfold.
You should probably do more research in this topic because this looks, to be bluntly honest, like an immature child wrote it.
Ugh...
Firstly:
"Just remember one thing before you post a hate message to me. Love and Tolerance."
And just remember before you trot out that banal, hopelessly worthless attempt to avoid criticism for this hopelessly worthless fanfic: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14266/Three-Little-Words
And secondly:
It's fairly obvious that you have borrowed the idea from TheOnly's story. You have also quite clearly added your own opinions, so there's not real issue there. No, the issue is that you have bluntly stated your opinion at the start of the chapter, and then have constructed the rest of the story to match that.
The beauty of TheOnly's work, to me at least, is that their opinion was never mentioned within the story itself. They just had the characters act in a way that fit their character, or the author's interpretation of their character for the background ponies, and the conclusion could be wrought from there. It was pretty-much always a fairly-blatant, foregone conclusion at any rate, but it did at least rely on fitting character interaction.
This though... Well, since you've had to ask for people to love and tolerate your work, it's clear that your predicting criticism and won't pay a blind bit of notice to any, but here goes:
The actual story element of this is dreadful. Characterisations are wildly off (Why would AJ ever leave her farm? Why would RD ever be that needlessly cruel? She's insensitive, yes, but she also cares about her friends when it actually matters), the writing is riddled with errors and spelling mistakes ("So much for the tastes pony in Ponyville", " I scream doug to no one"), and it just feels lazy, like you wrote it only after you realised that merely bluntly stating your opinion does not constitute a fanfic.
EDIT: And 624993 has summed up why your issues with this pairing are essentially skin-deep niggles far more eloquently than I ever could.
You need to make it more obvious that these will be your opinion on certain ships and a story. Also, it's cluttered as all hell, so you might want to fix that.
I think that your opinion was right. They are challenging each other nearly every second they are together, but since the Running of the Leaves, they have started to do this only for fun and there is actually a room for this kind reationship. I think AJ or RD are sensitive enough to be together, but I also think that they are better matches.
About your work...I would just repeat some of the things the others said before me.
No just no
twidash is best ship
Appledash is horrible.
*reads title* Oh gwad and they said i can read anything... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_YouDontSay2.png
Dude, take the essay to your blog and write me a real fic, with a beginning, middle, and end, showing the relationship not working. That's what shipfic authors do to show the relationship working, so why should bashers get off any easier?
If you want to know how I would argue that it could work, you can read my fics. That's my argument for this ship, and it's all I have to say.
624993
625006
I really can't say anything that they haven't said.
624993
And your extremely correct. I'm still a child. I don't know everything about grammar yet. I'm still trying to improve though. And I'm just trying to state my opinion. I never said that Applejack stopped working at the farm. She just doesn't live there anymore. Simple as that. I'll still try to take your critism though. I should think more about Apple Jack and Rainbow Dash's personalities. Even write some stories to get the hang of it.
And no. I did not get the idea from his story. I thought of this way before TheOnly posted his work.
You know you shoudn't have snuck the fiic into this chapter it just made things worse.
I do agree though that the Appledash ship would probably sink with all their arguing, it's been done to death alongside Fluttermac.
Just a thought but couldn't it go either way with this ship? I mean if ya wanna tally the relationship compatibility points of these two it looks about even. (in my opinion)
627606
Well just think of it this way. If you improve from this, then it wasn't time wasted. You have to mess up to get better, after all, so just keep that in mind and you'll find your work improving.
I am going to give my honest opinion on this ...
I only tolerate non -straight shippings.There I said it .
I just find it a bit disturbing.I use Mlp :Fim to escape realty
and to avoid conflict and done appreciate people using some
sisterly love between the mane six .I am terribly sorry to say that
but I keep myself bottled up enough in my life
I just can't take it .And growing up now adays just easy.(12)
Sorry if i offend .I am never respeced in and never asked for my opinion.
I feel free to state my opinion here .Again,my apologies to those who I offend.
Twi dash is terrible appledash is best