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Add a bit of pink in your life.

Never been loved and cared by anyone. Decided to live alone in a quiet place, doing what he enjoy doing without anyone making fun of him or hurting him. Then one day three anthropomorphic ponies appeared that he saw before into his life.
Will they be kind to him for the first time in his life or will they be the same like the others?

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abandoned2123

abandoned2123 #1 · May 21st, 2012 · · ·

Before you continue this; keep in mind that this plot line has been done many, many times before. As such; people are less likely to come and read. Your prose isn't half-bad, but you may want to consider the help of a prereader.

Sean Retro

Sean Retro #2 · May 21st, 2012 · · ·

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I know this kind of plot has been done before and it’s only a matter of time before more comes (not by me) it’s just up to the readers if they like it or not.
Your right about one thing, I do need a prereader. I just don’t offered ask for help and a bit stubborn.

Lateinshowing

Lateinshowing #3 · Sep 15th, 2012 · · ·

Any news on an update?

Sean Retro

Sean Retro #4 · Sep 17th, 2012 · · ·

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Not sure when I’m updating this one again, I’m seemed to be busy with my other one I’m doing and working on another story. Also getting side track doesn’t help as well.