A cute little fanfiction about imperial ponies and their special abilities~doki.
And why Rainbow Dash turned into a cat, well kitten~doki.
Story so far is only half thought through, more tags will be added closer to the end/ middle...~doki?
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Huh, this is interesting...I'll be tracking this! Can't wait to see more!
Okay I get the ~doki thing when you're having conversations or something but when you put it in descriptions it's kinda distracting, and it drives people away. Try to make the description less like it's you talking, and more like it's something you'd actually find advertising a book. Just advice though.
when I typed doki it legit tried to autocorrect it to Fiji, なんてこったい!
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"Go, and never darken my towels again!"
7954195 Arrigato ~doki
Thank you I appreciate it, I have more to come ~doki
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dokidoki
like in at least half the songs I listen to. ~doki
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Doki as in
Japanese word representing the sound of a heartbeat ~doki
7955996 I understand that, I was just advising against using it in story descriptions.
7956143 That would make a lot more sense if I didn't watch animes where they let characters with verbal tics narrate ~doki
7963356 But people don't generally talk like that, so it looks unprofessional in a story description.
7963413 goes back to gobi characters~doki
7966397 ?? um okay
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dokidoki 
Thanks for commenting ~ doki
7977787 No problem
7978979 Arigatou ~doki
dokidoki 
thanks for commenting ~doki
I'm not entirely sure how to answer ~doki
In the synopsis, is it really necessary to put "~doki" at the end of every sentence? I don't find it annoying, (really, I don't) but it's kinda distracting.
8002340 Sorta the point ~doki
But seriously check my other stories ~doki
8003553 I this story dead? -Doki
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Not dead timezone issues with my tablet and my country not using daylight savings got me some problems~ doki
After that I was just lazy, new chapter should come by next week ~ doki
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Alrighty then, look forward to seeing it
WTF is going on? I don't even want to start this story this looks so bazaar the fact that I am commenting on a story I don't plan to read is just me trying to express to the world how truly odd this story sounds good luck to all who enjoy it
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Don't worry~doki
It's not as hard to read if you get over my poor description~doki