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Carbon Black

An old charcoal burner visits Whitetail Woods, and is visited in turn by Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo.

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Fana Farouche

Fana Farouche #1 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · · ·

Initially I felt the voices of the CMCs when they first appear were a little off, a little too formal and flat, but the story has a nice tone, if that makes sense.

So, have a fave and an upvote.

Manga Shoggoth