There are a lot of things this show has taught me. When I started watching, I never expected it to affect me as much as it has. But now that I'm here, I don't know what I'd do without you all!
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This should've had a second chapter
Fantastic
Glorious! Another amazing story by Vinyl Wubs, and futa at that. Nice job, once again!
Well...this was umm... I'm sorry but what did I just read I thought I read some intense and good stuff but this is just.
*Breathes in then out*
Well first off this is a very intense and funny no not even that hilarious clopfic the comedy is timed very well and the sex is well strangely erotic.
Secondly the pacing and story. The padding is well timed with based on who were focusing on like how it's impossibly fast with only Pinkie and when it neutral with the twins. The story there's not much because of it being a single chapter but it is actually more then believable it's convincing.
Lastly your score. I can't give you one because you broke the scale I mean this literally all I can give is this /10. So as a reward for being the first to do that you shall get a cinnamon-roll cookie
6080579 It's people like you that make me feel like this:
That timing! Next you'll say they finish up a massive 5-way and then the other Mane girls show up and it just descends into a gigantic orgy of unwritable clop because everyone is doing everyone and nobody can actually see anything and then someone opens the crazy box and The SnSmoozeooze comes out and traps everyone in its slimy folds.
6109249 ...
*Begins writing sequel.*
Dangit Wubz, you're just too damned good
So, is Mr. Cake happy at the surprise, or flabbergnasted/slightly pissed? This needs a second chapter, though it looks like there won't be one
Anyway, looks like Pound and Pumpkin are gonna have siblings in some time (BTW, I know that they are probably knocked up anyway, despite the twins saying that they have super-fertile equipment, and apparently heavy-duty contraceptives
[ quote this sentence:
“And those rings are magic, they’re pretty much contraceptives.” Zee smiled.
“Like, super knocked up. No contraceptive you could take would save you.” Mee continued.] unless it's a safe day, both Pinkie and Mrs. Cake should be showing baby bumps in a few months)
.....Unless I completely misread that passage, or it's a pretty big typo/logic flaw in the story.
Other than that, it's worth a few laughs. Worth reading it at least.
6336347 Yeah you got it about squared up.