Fate shoves Fluttershy and Big Macintosh together after a terrible accident. They both had already considered maybe... trying something together. Now, they have all the time in the world. They go on various dates, and see just how right they are for each other.
~Credits go to AmbrosiaKitsune for the cover pic!
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ah like what im seeing. Please continue.
I agree! More, please?
I am interested! FlutterMac and AppleDash, two of my favorites! Can't wait to see more.
Just one tiny thing. . . "Y'all" is plural. When AJ is talking about Mac or Mac is talking about Fluttershy, it's just "you" or "ya." When AJ is talking about both of them, "y'all" is right. (I wouldn't even point it out, but it's a pet peeve of mine and I'm really enjoying the story otherwise.)
I like how this is sounding so far keep it rolling and dont break fluttershy to badly.
awesome nuff said
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Right, sorry about that... I'll fix it as soon as I figure out how to.
I like but one thing with southern accents
1 person = you
2-6 = y'all
7+ = all y'all
I read the whole thing somewhere before and it was so awesome, it's still in my bookmarks.
I may just have to read it again.
Instead of having
"*Nod*" You could have a line that says
"Fluttershy slowly nodded, laying her head down to follow Applejack's request. She turned to look at her roommate." etc.
Remember: Show, don't tell.
Good chapter though
wow that was kind of crazy but okay
more? it feels unfinished. but maybe its supposed to be like that.
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Well, there is a reason I put it as "Incomplete"... Though I do admit, that chapter was a bit... odd, ending off.
Anyway, I'm going to be getting the next chapter out shortly, and hopefully I will have an editor by then... so yeah.
awesome!
My favorite feeling from stories is suspense. It's the hardest, IMO, to write for, but the most satisfying to achieve. Excellent work on the suspense, I can't wait to see more!
So glad you updated this!
but that cliffhanger!!! 
If she kiss him then thte heart monitor would bebebebebebebebebebebe!!!!!
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Sorry about that; I am addicted to them. Once the story moves into their dates and such, their will be alot fewer. (That, and this chapter has been driving me insane.)
Woooooooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooooooo! NOTHER DOWN VOTE WITH ABSOLUTELY NO COMMENT AS PER WHY! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Oh, now this Ah’ve got ta see…
Took the words right out of my mouth.
Big Mac, why the fuck would you sing a song about drinking, smoking, and suicide to Fluttershy?
1501756 Well, it IS a song titled "Whiskey LULLABY"... Though I will admit it is vague. Just wait for tomorrow's update.
One typo I noticed - 'She trot over to the seat' instead of 'trotted'. Otherwise, pretty good.
That centre alignment was quite hard to read this time around.
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Right... sorry about that, I'll try to make sure it's easier to read next time. (Truth be told, I usually do this on Word, copy pasta it, put in the italics and what-have-you, and post it. I'll make sure to be better about it next time.)
Autumn Leaf is Fluttershy's father!!?
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I love this. I am so glad this fic isn't abandoned. Take your time friend, I will always be here ready to read the next chapter. Fluttershy has met her father, I am so excited to see what happens next!
father!>?!?>!>!>!>!>!>!.21xdfvxzgbcnbgn
2227717 Well, you finally did it Runeplay, you broke Bob.
You froze Bob today, You did Runeplay.
Bill Clinthoof? Seriously? It's bad enough when real people get ponified and just get a horse pun stuck in their name, but this doesn't even sound right. The least you you could've done is Clintrot.
I've been putting off this chapter for a while (Darn you Past Sins!) now that I've read it, I say it was well worth it!
She pimped Mac out to the princess then woke up spooning Rarity!? What the heck is going ahn!!
I'm with BobtheLurker on this one. I am utterly confused here...
I'm intrigued with how this turned into a game of musical beds
Besides that great chapter. I loved your characterization of Celestia and your portray of Big Mac is astounding as ever. I've watched Watership Down, under the same false pretenses that poor Flutters experienced. I don't think at the time I had cried that hard since the Littlefoort's mom in The Land Before Time. Good thing she had her coltfriend there to help her through it. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this story as it seem someponie's got sum splaining to do 
I think you mean Harry Trotter
2438845 Bill Clinthoof?????????? Human name please