Join Fluttershy and Trixie as they travel across the land of Equestria performing for the entertainment of ponies. Make some bits and maybe realize something more.
Made because the world needs more Trixieshy.
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going in my read later
yeah! more trixieshy!
besides some sentance issues, this is really really good. please hurry with the next chapter.
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Yeah, about that... I wrote this back in March (along with another story that's stuck at 8000 words...) so yeah I need time to write it. I have a plan for most of this but it might be a while til another but worry not since this has gain some interest I will continue with it.
A good, simple, and short opening chapter. There is some sentence structure and grammar issues, but I understood what was being said and I am curious to see where this story goes.
Ausome i love this story!
It is a good story so far and interesting to read, but you need to work on your grammar a bit. I get what you are trying to say but there are alot of missused or misspelled words at times.
Example: “Hey um Fluttershy, you know I really don’t think you should be giving up most of your things belongings here. "
Not trying to be a jerk because I do like the story but you may need to try to iron out little word errors.like this :)
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Hmm? True that my grammar sucks but that's a sentence from chapter two. That should have been pointed out by my proof-reader Starfall. Oh well. I'll correct it. Starfall is helping me correct some things in Chapter 1 as well right now.
Anyways, enough rambling I thank you for liking my story and giving me some criticism to help improve it.
nice to use a gen 3 pony in the story first in the chapter
821139
Um, I'm sorry... What?
You mean the Posey reference? That's Gen 1 actually not 3.
my bad so anyways will
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make babies or adopt cause that would be so fuking adorible
821741
Pfffft hahahahha.
Yes, there will be many magical lesbian offspring.
I don't know to be honest. It won't end like that but give it your own personal ending if that makes you feel better.
Much cleaner then the last chapter, and I am quite interested in what will happen to them as they travel. I am also curious on what the others will think when they find out about Fluttershy willingly going with Trixie, but no rush to get there. It is quite out of the ordinary for her to suddenly leave everything behind, but if she has a...'interest' in Trixie, well, that feeling can make someone do odd things.
Wonderfull story.