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As the Grand Galloping Gala draws near, Rainbow Dash is set to impress with the dress Rarity had designed. She is met with approval from all but one pony.

Takes place during the episode of "Make New Friends but Keep Discord"
One Shot fic

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

a scratchy voice was heard from the dressing room, eliciting a giggle from three fillies and a certain Apple farmer.

Doesn't need the lower case 'a' here as it isn't quite a transitive sentence from the dialogue.

Fun story! I thought the narrative was a bit minimalist in spots, but enjoyable nonetheless. ^^

wzium #2 · Jun 2nd, 2015 · · ·

Well... it was nice :pinkiehappy:

Cute and fluffy.
My overall thought?
19 out of 19 starfishes with bikinis. :coolphoto:

I am trying so hard not to laugh right now.

Cute.

I liked it! :pinkiehappy:

Next thing you know Sweetie Belle will ask the dragon of her dreams.

"Oh yes I can. So you better get use to having a rainbow stuck on your flank. I'll convince you all night if I have to!"

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYUM! :ajsmug:

A beautiful rainbow fiddle and AJ knows how to play.

Ha ha...I would've liked to see how the Gala would've played out for them two.
...sequel, maybe?:twilightsheepish:

:duck: "Maybe Spikey can take lessons from AJ or Rainbow?"

:moustache: "Awesome Apples?"

:raritywink: " Game Spikey wikey"

:moustache: "Hoof Ball Season!"

:raritystarry:

:facehoof: !

6052557 It killed me too

6050800 Didn't think about it. For you (and the rest), I'll see what I can do

This story was amazing!
I really enjoyed this one.
9/10
Only thing I would've done differently is rename it to "Applejack's got Game"

Look closely Rarity. This is their natural habitat. What are you not seeing that could be interpreted as romance?

loll xD that got me :pinkiegasp: its like on national geographic lmao

Applejack knows what to say, good job

OMG!!!! That's price less! "Rarity only had one thought in mind. Applejack's got game??!!!!!" That's the line that got me!

Nice! :):heart: I know that you might have a chance to win if you add more details and emotions! :)

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