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BronyDan


Well, Bore da or Prynhawn da everypony, this is BronyDan. It's not original but, 'ey you try coming up with originality these days.

Comments ( 11 )

Well, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

:ajsmug:

Ha! laughed at a few of the jokes.

haha! :pinkiehappy: :rainbow laugh: :yay: :pinkiecrazy:

This isn't a bad fic. If you wandered by for the description, feel free to kill a couple minutes, because it does deliver Maud doing standup, and some of it's modestly clever comedy (although it feels awfully choppy).

My real problem here is that there doesn't seem to be an awful lot to this story. Maud does standup. Pinkie and Trixie are there. We find out that Maud and Trixie are dating at the end. There's no conflict; it doesn't go anywhere. It runs through the premise and then stops.

I've heard of those jokes before and they're still funny, are you a fan of Mock The Week by any chance? (If you've heard of it) :ajsmug:

I love it!:heart:

Maud Pie doing the works of Frankie Boyle in a monotone would be awesome.

But this is good, too. :ajsmug:

6044952 I always felt that if Maud were to be a comedian, she would be like Milton Jones.

6041294 I used to watch it, up until Frankie Boyle and Russell Howard left.

6044958

Good call, although she might lack that slightly spaced-out demeanour.

How about Stewart Lee, since I could see her being a fan of grinding, tedious repetition. :rainbowwild:

Felt a lot like Steven Wright's style. Monotone tone, jokes with absurd premises.

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