Equestria is plunged into war, battles break out everywhere. The Mane 6 have to learn the way of the tank before they become prey to the horrors of war. Please leave any feedback as well as any fixes for the story anything is accepted. Also please forgive the authors notes in the first two chapters, learning how to use this new site.
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This is not actually that good of a thing. Sure, it's a nice concept but it falls flat. Not to mention the intense show VS tell here. Downvoted, but I'd be willing to help out.
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Ah, I see. You are trying to make a game out of it. Stories don't work that way. Whereas video games tell through actions and rewards, we aren't being rewarded EXP, they are. A suggestion here would be to just change the way you are thinking about it. Stories exist as art in mere words.
Also, again with the show VS tell.
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Thanks for the advice, admittedly, I wrote these chapters before referring to the guide so expect the writing to get better. As for the XP, it is crucial for the story for that's how they gain new tanks and modules. It is not a game, just information to the story. It is explained in the story that they need to work for better and bigger tanks. Any help is appreciated for making this story as enjoyable as I can make it. Thank you.
interesting crossover with wot.
also will other pony crews be joining the mane six (like bonbon, lyra, octavia, and vinyl scratch being one crew)?
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Thanks for enjoying it! I am focusing on the mane 6 for now, but may add in other crews later. The reason i may not is three tanks is a lot to keep track of as it is. If anything, I'll have other tanks with unknown crews.
The ways of Friedship?
Sounds greasy and delicious.