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    Locoattack1's Stories (5)

    • A New World 2: Nightmares
      When I end up in the hospital due to an accident, I start having nightmares... DashxOC DerpyxOC

      28,912 words · 1,183 views · 83 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Dashie
      Rainbow Dash ends up with me on Earth and we become closer than I would have ever imagined
      7,014 words · 1,105 views · 80 likes · 9 dislikes
    • Stranger: Revised and Rebooted
      A remeake of my old story; Stranger. Will a wanderer in a post apocalyptic Equestria
      5,995 words · 157 views · 8 likes · 0 dislikes
    • A New World

      73,960 words · 4,716 views · 210 likes · 82 dislikes
    • Stranger
      8,674 words · 734 views · 16 likes · 6 dislikes
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    Yeah, the sequel's out now, so enjoy!

    A New World 2

    Comments ( 6 )

    #1 · 55w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>515108 I am one of THE MOST die-hard fans of Ditzy Doo out there!

    #2 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>631804 Actually, I'm 15 now. Also, the story's quality goes up in later chapters.

    #3 · 52w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>631956 You're kidding me, right? I spend six months writing pouring well over fifty hours of free time into a story and you get turned off by having to press a button to skip chapters?:ajbemused: I really don't understand your logic in any way, shape, or form.:facehoof:

    #4 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1082998

    Oh dammit, I'm sorry, I probably did it because of the too may chapters and the lack of mood to read lately.... I'm sorry, but I'll read the chapters and... make the things right!

    #5 · 20w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I would like this story if it dident start with oh my life sucks bullshit. I'm asking should I read it even though the first line pissed me off beyond words, boo fucking hoo I know this is mean and I really hate to post this but will anyone tell me this will get better.

    #6 · 1w, 20h ago · · ·
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    First, there is absolutely no plot. It’s just a series of events barely held together by the, already weak, premise of a concert with your Mary Sue of a self-insert as the centre of the universe.

    Second, you have derailed absolutely every single character in the show, turning them into mindless drones whose only purpose is to praise and cater to the needs of your self-insert. The case of Rainbow Dash is particularly bad; you turned her into a copy of the filly from “My Little Dashie”.

    Last but not least, what infuriates me the most about this “story” is the sheer misanthropy present in it. I seriously hope it is just a phase of your adolescent years, because otherwise you are utter scum undeserving of any kind of sympathy.

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