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Hey everybrony, It’s me again with the finale for A New World. Just so you know, I do have a sequel planned and the plot will be much more awesome than this story’s plot was. Anyhow, this chapter is late because my pre reader was late in emailing me back.
The pony leaps onto the stage, and then folds her wings back. I take off my mau5head in order to be more personable, setting it on my table. The costumed mare turns to look at me, then smiles.
“Man, that was one awesome show!” She grins, flaring her wings up, “I mean, I really don’t listen to too much music, but those songs were so cool!”
“Heh, thanks! They’re some of my favorites!” I blush a bit at the compliment coming from a total stranger, “Who are you, anyway?”
“Don’t tell anypony, but it’s really me.” She whispers into my ear, “I’m Spitfire, the Wonderbolt.” I double back in shock.
“Whoa! Yo-you’re famous!” I point at her in a startled whisper, “So awesome! Three famous ponies came to my concert!” I fist pump, feeling pride coursing through my body.
“Speaking of famous, I think I have a way to get you a bit more famous.” She motions for me to move closer and I comply, “That music you played had an awesome feel to it, and that’s just what the Wonderbolts need. We really haven’t had any background music to our performances for a while.” I begin to shake, realizing what she’s telling me.
“I, the leader of the Wonderbolts, want you to play at our next performance in Cloudsdale.” I mentally explode in happiness, but manage to keep my cool, “I’ll fill you in on the details soon, and when do you wanna meet up? I need some new music to go along with our routines.”
“My house, over across the street.” I shakily point a finger in the general direction of my abode, “How about in two days at noon, I need to recover from this concert.”
“Okay then, two days from now, 12:00.” Spitfire repeats to me, “Be ready, and try not to get everypony on my flank. I really don’t feel like being mobbed by everypony anytime soon.” She flashes an akward smile.
“I understand, but there is one pony I want you to meet.” I point to the cyan pegasus talking to her friends, “You probably remember her from the Best Young Flyer thing. She is your biggest fan, and I think that she’d love to meet you.”
“Oh, Rainbow Dash! I remember her!” The mare’s face lights up in recognition, “She saved my life! And she was at that Gala, too bad I didn’t get time to talk to her.”
“So, you’ll talk to her now?” I ponder her reply.
“Yeah, just tell her not to make a big deal out of it.” Spitfire turns to me, waiting for me to do something.
“Hey Dashie! Get over here!” I get her attention as she says goodbye to her friends and leaps up on stage.
“Yeah, what’s up?” She asks, curious.
“Well, I think I have a pony her you may want to meet.” I gesture to Spitfire. Rainbow Dash show a hint of recognition, most likely thinking that it’s a cosplayer.
“Hey, that’s a great costume. Where’d you buy it?” Rainbow Dash asks, admiring the fabric.
“Shh, it’s me, remember?” The firey orange mare asks Dashie, “Spitfire, the Wonderbolt.” Dashie gasps, taking a huge intake of air.
“Omigoshomigoshomigosh!” She exclaims excitedly, talking in a rapid pace.
“Shh, shh. I don’t want everypony here to know it’s me.” She puts a hoof over the cyan mare’s mouth to silence her.
“Heh, sorry. Guess I got a tad carried away, but you’re so awesome!” Dash says in a quieter voice, “Like that one time you did that awesome loop de loop swirl…” Dashie goes on about Spitfire’s various stunts, still in minor disbelief that her idol is standing in front of her.
I chuckle at her overenthusiasm and look back at my monitor, closing it after a second. Looking out on the crowd, I see Scootaloo eyeing me with a glint of admiration in her eyes. I smile at her and hop down to meet the tomboyish filly.
“Hey Scootaloo, what’s up!” I greet her with a smile, “Like the concert?”
“It was totally awesome! That one rock and roll song was so cool!” She hums the melody a few times, “Even the quieter songs at the end were totally sweet!”
“Yeah, that last song is my personal favorite. I’m actually thinking of making my own tracks under Vinyl’s record name.” I think out loud, making Scootaloo jump with excitement.
“That would be so cool! But how do you do those sounds?” She looks at me with confusion, “Do you use a guitar or something?” Go figure, guitars in Equestria.
“Actually, I could show you a little bit right now.” I motion for her to follow me as I climb up the stairs and she does so. I reach the table with my laptop and open the computer. Scootaloo hops and flaps her wings furiously, but she isn’t tall enough to see over the table. I see her pained expression and, without thinking, I decide to pick her up and set her on the table. She flashes me a smile of gratitude and stares at the screen.
“What’s that?” She asks, confused at the sight of my laptop, “That doesn’t look like an instrument.”
“It isn’t, just watch this.” I pull open Fl Studio and select new project.
“What’s this?” The filly is yet again confused. This… is gonna take awhile.
---Twenty Minutes later---
“So the piano roll is totally awesome for mixing, and I love the sytrus synth.” I explain to the orange filly.
“That’s cool! I get it now!” She exclaims, “I wish I could stay longer, but I’ve gotta get home soon.”
“Don’t forget about your free album!” I say, handing her a copy of my Vinyl, “Have fun now, and see ya later!”
I watch as the cute little filly runs down the road to Ponyville, happy as can be. Man, I love that. I turn to Rainbow Dash just as she waves goodbye to Spitfire.
“So, you gonna go home now?” She asks me, smiling.
“Meh, I’ve gotta pass out the free albums, then I’ll crash.”
“Okay then, I’ll wait here for you.” Dashie replies for a smile.
---Thirty Minutes Later--- --Time 12:00--
“See ya Twilight!” I shout while walking toward my house, laptop in hand, “Glad you enjoyed the concert!”
Everypony I talked to, even Princess Celestia (who apparently has no idea how I got here), loved the concert. Looking to my right, I see Dashie walking next to me. The sight brings a certain warmth to my heart, especially after the events that unfolded tonight. In my other hand, I am clutching the mau5head.
After a long walk in silence, I and Dashie reach my house. I open the door and gesture for her to go in first, and then follow her inside, shutting the door after me.
“Danny… thanks for that song.” She hooves the ground awkwardly, “I…I really liked it.” She then gives me a large hug, squeezing me tightly. I return the hug, holding onto her for what feels like forever.
“Hey, I think I should get to bed soon.” I say, pulling away from the hug suddenly.
“Okay then.” The mare says in agreement, “Hey, where’s Jaycee?”
“I dunno, is he still at the field?” I ask the mare, suddenly puzzled at Jay’s whereabouts.
“I didn’t see him there when we left.” She answers, confused as well.
“BAM!!! Gotcha muthafucka!” I hear a voice yell from deeper within the house.
“I think I know where Jaycee is…” I roll my eyes and begin to lead Dashie to my bedroom. Opening the door, I see that Jaycee is lying on my bed, playing Modern Warfare 2.
“Oh, hey guys.” He says, not turning his head from the TV screen, “Just finishing up the match, one sec.” I wait there with Dashie for a little bit, and finally the match ends with a headshot.
“So, did you like the concert?” I ask him.
“Yeah dude, totally awesome music!” He suddenly exclaims, “Those songs in the middle were super awesome and that last song was just boss.”
“Yeah, it was a total riot.” I chuckle a bit, “Anyways, I’ve gotta get some sleep. And by the way dude,” I pause a bit before finishing, “You should take a shower, your hair’s looking a tad sweaty.” I grin at my troll statement, causing Jay to get a tad annoyed. He’s one mad bro…
“Whatever man, see ya tomorrow.” Jaycee says, shutting off the Xbox and walking out the door. I wonder what he’s gonna do here… I ponder the question for a second, then dismiss it, returning my focus to Rainbow Dash. I look over to my bed and see her lying down in it, gesturing for me to come closer.
I turn the light off and set down both my mau5head and my laptop on my brother’s bed. Moving over to my bed, I begin to settle down under the cover with Dash. Once settled, I hear her sigh and feel her soft hooves gently wrap around my body.
“Thanks again for that song, it was really awesome, just like you.” She says, clutching me tighter and pressing her face against my neck.
“Thanks, thanks a lot.” I say to her, closing my eyes and hugging her whilst resting my head on her’s, “You know, before I came here, I was dealing with serious self esteem issues. I now, thanks to you, no longer have any of those.”
“Danny, I love you.” She stares into my eyes, enveloping me in a feeling of lightheadedness, “I always have, and always will.”
“I love you too.” I move my mouth closer to hers and embrace her in a passionate kiss. The kiss seems to last forever, and I wouldn’t have it any other way. Eventually, she pulls away and begins to talk again.
“I’d…I’d quit the Wonderbolts for you.” She says, resting her head once again on my chest.
“I…I’d do anything for you.” Mental images of the various tortures I’d endure for her flash through my head.
“Goodnight, Dashie.” I say in a whisper, stroking her mane. This causes her to sigh and relax a bit more. After a few minutes of combing through her mane, I begin to feel drowsy and see everything fade away. I couldn’t have asked for a more perfect mare, for a more perfect new beginning, for a more perfect world. A new world.
There you have it! I would love some feedback on this chapter. For those of you who didn’t know, I will be doing a complete overhaul of my old Stranger story. Peace out, for now!
Also, here's an awesome song: Spitfire