I was actually going to write an FMA Brotherhood Crossover myself. I just hope we didn't have the same exact idea. I applaud your fine taste in animation.

FMA Crossover?! I HAVE TO READ THIS!!!!

FMA

Watched:

Original Series - Once in Japanese and once in English dub.

Brotherhood - Twice in Japanese Three times in English dub.

The first movie - Once in Japanese once in English dub.

ahhhhhggggg I can't get enough fma!!!

Oh ho ho ho! Solid action, and my favorite Homonculus (Greed) in pony form! Color me damn intrigued.

>>612067612067 Thank you for the compliment!

Also, I don't see the trouble if you post a fic of your own

Envy as a changeling?

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Envy is the Chrysalis Queen? Dis gun b gud.

Not much of a FMA fan, but I'm pretty sure who Lust and Gluttony are.

I want money, I want women, I want status, and power! I want everything the world has to offer, and another chapter is topping the list!

>>612255612255 Not Chyrsalis, but a changeling, yes

Also, as you can tell by the wording, I try to make Envy androgynous.

Ha! Theres Sloth, I was wondering whenever that lazy prick was going to show up. But hey, thats 6 down, only one to go. Although that gets me wondering, due to Pride's strange fate when compared to the others...will he show up in this?

Still, this is a awsome crossover, I cannot wait for more!

>>612374612374 Sloth's my favorite Homunculus, actually

Also, Pride didn't exactly die in the series. He was only stripped of his power and forced to live life as a human, so he's not gonna be in this story. He WILL be mentioned, though.

..........................just when I thought i was done with your stories........you bring out this!

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its official

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My only concern is where Pride is.

>>614521614521

I second that emotion

i think envy's getting huuuuuuungryyyyyy

Oh sucks to be Envy for once, it seems that his status as a Changeling may be working against him already....

Celestia better watch out, it seems she may have some guests soon enough...

Pride didn't die. He became a small kid.

So will this be a daily update weekly dare I say it monthly?

>>614521614521 Pride's not gonna be in the story, I explained in an earlier comment

>>615575615575 It updates on my own time. Real life can kick my ass sometimes. That bully

>>615078615078 You catch on fast

meh... that language will get them into trouble... is this FMA or FMAB based? I assume FMAB because of the vague reference to father... now to see if all of the former deadly sins can redeem themselves in this plane.

Well THIS is interesting... why do I get the feeling that they function as the counterpoint to the elements of harmony? Pride isn't related to any of the elements very much, so that means... they are discord's soon-to-be underlings!

>>624621624621 You get this feeling because there are six of them, two of them each representing the three pony races.

And no, Discord will not be involved

>>628763628763 Rats... well it was a fun thought.

Squeezing this in before studying for my midterm. Cuz I felt like it

Don't worry, I'll be sure to post better chapters once I resolve my stupid class

i love the way this stories going

wonder when envy will figure out how to feed though......

I wonder if Celestia will notice that Envy's a Changeling?

Very interested to see where this goes! Tracking!

Wrath is best pony.

There won't be a pride cause he never died.. And if he does end up here.. He'll be a shadow or a nightmare moon dust cloud :/

This is not going to end well... I'd bet on it.

Wrath is still best pony.

>>647625647625 I beg to differ. Sloth is best pony

>>647652647652 They're ALL best pony.

>>647657647657 Duly noted

1) It is unfair to state that they are best ponies when they are homunculi, regardless of physical form.

2) These guys need some visual references. Sorry, but the only relevant one I could find was Envy, and she'd be in disguise considering story canon.

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3) Greed, don't even THINK about hitting on Celestia. She's several thousand years to old for you. I don't care if she DOES seem interested.

4) Wrath is holding up rather well against that legendary raig of his.

5) Lust seems to be taking a bit of a background seat here... unusual. I'd half expect her to be using her feminine charms against the guards, though considering she's a pony and not really adapted yet, that might just be confusing to her. Also, Sloth seems to need a nap. Why not just give him a nice bed up on dragon mountain?

6) Gluttony spit that out. You don't know where and who it's been in.

7) Luna is genre savvy. Must be residual insanity from her lunar vacation.

EDIT: Correction. Looks like Lust is out there too. Sloth even, but it's the FMA sloth and not the FMAB sloth. No luck with the others.

>>647730647730

1) Doesn't matter, best pony

2) If you manage to craft visual references prior to the ones given in Chapters 1-3, then by all means. All I can say is that they all lack the nodes they held in their previous forms.

3) You know Greed, wanting to be around women Also, she's not interested in a relationship, but you shall see soon enough

4) Wrath IS considered the most patient and collective out of the Homunculi as stated in his wiki, and channels his rage well in battle

5) She is confused as to her current state, but she'll use her charms soon enough, just not now. As for Sloth, he's in for a rude awakening in the later chapters.

6) They made him a spear, but he eated it...

7) Genre savvy? I'm confused...

Problem, Luna?

Anyway, I'm just wondering what the reaction will be when it's revealed that Envy is a changeling. If the reaction to Gluttony was any indication...

AN UPDATE!

another brilliant chapter, still wondering how long envys going to starve to death

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Bradly/Wrath as a pony

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Greed

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Gluttony

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King Bradley is Best Pony.

>>647822647822 You didn't spoil too much, so please erase EDIT: I was able to delete the comment myself. Go figure :U

>>648279648279 To be honest, I derived Gluttony's appearance from your link, but everypony else was all me

oooooooooh envys starting to get it

another awsome chapter and you update so quickly................do you sleep at all?

>>649836649836 Yes

Envy's bit was amusing to read.

MOOOOAAAAARRRR!!!

>>648279648279

Eh, some of those work and some don't. Such as Bradley not being a pegasus. However, that's still better than I could get.

>>648872648872 No problem. No offense if I bothered you by my predictions. I guess I'm just good at reading between the lines.

Edit: Read. Wondered how long it would be before the 6DS started to adapt. I kinda pity them now... and that surprises me. I NEVER would have expected myself to pity ANY of them.

How did you pull it off?! I am now feeling pity for artificially born abominations! Greed and Gluttony, cursed by their existence to never be sated, to never be content. Envy, the embodiment of jealousy now forced to literally feed on the very love she despises... Sloth and Lust are pending, but from what I've read I expect the same feeling. I actually WANT them to have happy endings... to get a chance to spite what they are and be what they could be. This is amazing. Simply impossible!

>>649951649951 You were right about SOME of them, not all

As for your question, maybe I'm lucky to give feel in a mediocre fic. I kinda felt pity for Envy when he/she died in the anime.

>>650062650062 I had mixed feelings about Envy's passing in the anime. Rather, I felt that at least the bugger would finally be at rest. Greed I felt sad, but proud of almost. He turned his evil into good. I could actually see that happening to all of these guys... truth be told, I wish it would happen!

Wow

Greed was probablt the reason they're all in Equestria.

another brilliant chapter

im guessing the homunclus are going to turn good eventually? cant imagine how envy would ever turn nice

also WOOT! CERBERUS: ROUND 2!

>>658049658049

Taking all bets people taking all bets

Sloth slowly walking guards confused looks at him going what can be do? Then sloth just doing his charge making them all confused. I can imagine that.

Greed already understands the magic of friendship. It will serve him well.

Oh this is going to be good. Everyone is already wondering about Sloth, just imagine their reaction when he goes Round II with the bug puppy! I almost pity it...almost.

Heh, maybe Greed will fit in here alot better then I expected.

GreedxCelestia, make this happen. I have know idea why but I must see this happen. also I'm starting to wonder if they're still "immortal", I hope the next chapter will clear this up. other than this awesome chapter is awesome

>>659370659370 Too implausible, though Celestia does find him amusing as do I. Dang, I really DID predict a crapton of the plot back in that old post...

Yay for me, and que interrupting 3-headed canine. Someone get my Fluttershy and a ball, and probably Twilight. She'll have to walk the dog home again.

On another note... I wonder how the 6DS will handle knowing that Twilight's traveled through time?

or is it one of those "I thought we agreed never to speak of that again" things?

>>659370659370 Sorry, no GreedxCelestia Also, though they have retained their powers, they'll realize that they lack their immortality and regeneration skills.

>>659402659402 You'll see

>>659419659419 Oh I'm sure. You seem to be a much better writer than me, especially considering that I have one chapter of one story to my name that only just got posted.

wasn't expecting another chapter today, and with a cliff hanger like that I'm more than excited for the next one

Oh YES. Yesyesyesyesyes. I can't wait to see how that's gonna go down. Let's hope they don't kill each other. Stallions and Mares,

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And Celestia read Greed's mind flawlessly, and there have been references to terrible evil in Tartarus... Que antagonist!

I still can't wait to see who's gonna get the mentorship pairings with the EoH. I just KNOW that's how it's gonna happen.

shining armors gonna get SLAUGHTERED!

dis is gonna be gooooooooooooood

Wrath has this in the bag, Shining armor does not stand a chance. It took a trick from Scar (and his cumulative injuries) to finally kill him, Ling and Fu together barely matched him. He destroyed the Brigadier back in the fortress. A possible setback would be his unfamiliarity with his body as well as his age. Either way, this will be awesome.

>>659820659820 And then there's his Ultimate Eye...

Oh man, poor Shining Armor. He's gonna get his flank kicked.

>>659691659691 I can already guess that Rarity and Greed will be paired, for obvious reasons.

I know what you're thinking: Why didn't Wrath use his Ultimate Eye? Well, because he's Fuhrer and he's awesome

>>672618672618 That's right! Wrath is still best pony!

He's awesome enough that he didn't even need his Ultimate Eye against Shining Armor!

SLOTH IS BEST PONY

>>672892672892 And if he did use it, the battle would be over in forty-two seconds.

>>673023673023 Amen

id soo love to see the humunclus in an all out fight with the royal guard then again you probably wouldnt be able to fill a chapter with that since it would be over so fast

>>672618672618 and because revealing a trump card like that would be a critical mistake that 40 years of experience would not allow.

That does kinda make him unstoppable here in this universe though... kinda worrisome. He's practically OP.

Forgive the shortness. I just wanted to clear things up so I can move the plot along.

Yes, I said plot. As in storyline

The 'Oh-shit-o-meter' just broke.

I haven't read enough of the manga... but is this alicorn Pride? Or someone else?

No, wait. If it were Pride, he'd have the ouroboros cutie mark. Hm... someone who can transmute people into... marbles? Is this the Crimson Alchemist, the one that was in prison?

This is making me want to read the manga to completion...

FATHER!!!!!!!!!!! O God the shit just hit the fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh this isn't good

All of my whats

ALL OF THEM

>>693077693077 Grey Warden just answered your question

Father the first Homunculus and creator of the 7 sins.  

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I  just finished reading the manga, and then i saw you just include Father here, oh goddess...

RUN FOR COVER!

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another epic chapter

>>693077693077 this is the man who created the humonculi the dwarf in the flask he fused with truth ed went falco punch killed him

I'd have to lol if any other fma characters show up like eds dad or or his mother is in ponyville

oh crap

Here I thought he'd just been torn to pieces or whatever Truth did to him.

Hm, I get the distinct feeling Hoenhime is next

Oh god, it's Father!

Dis gon b gud!

>>693566693566 Do you have any extra room under that cart?

>>693077693077 Drat then we both need to replace our ohsnapometers. I'd make a run to the store for you, but a storm is coming.

>>693603693603 Nope, just them

>>693767693767 Truth is a mysterious one Also, no Hohenheim

Ok the main 6 are going to keep an eye on them so here are  the pairings I  see happening.

Sloth is with Applejack

Greed is with Twilight

Envy is with Fluttershy

Lust is with Rarity

Gluttony is with Pinkie Pie

And Wraith is with Rainbow dash   AM I right Dirty Bit????

>>706812706812 Just watch

Father and Wrath are both best pony.

I look forward to moar!!!

Uh-oh. Blueblood is here? This is going to end poorly.

Moar please?

Somehow I expect everything to go nuts.

Chrysalis is working with Father. That kind of alliance is the most unholy thing I can imagine.

Wrath sure appears to be happy. I am guessing he's manipulating the princesses to get power... but then again why would he? his orders from father are over, so he doesn't have to do that anymore.

Ah, Father never changes. I can't see that alliance ending well...

BlueBlood? Oh god, there is going to be a painful ending to that meeting...I love it!

another brilliant chapter, cant wait to see the elements react to their evil conterparts (especially waiting to see how someone like fluttershy would react to envy's sadistic streak)

p.s. envy in both best changeling and best pony

Without Pride i feels weird

>>713032713032 You'll get used to it

One chapter tonight

Another tomorrow

>>714666714666

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>>714666714666

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_wsRJINp2Dpc/TSJqPCAUNyI/AAAAAAAAAIU/lubrDQ0D6ko/s1600/Patient_Bear_by_Nastyguy.jpg

if its not out by tomorrow well come at it with a blowtorch .

......why is it whenever bluebloods in a story i want him to die? it a mistery i guess

also im kinda looking forward to how you will make the homunclus fit in without them getting violent, not cos i want them to, im just waiting to see how you will make it believable

also i get greed will go with generocity and wrath will probalby go to kindness (or maby twilight), but who the heck is the opposite of envy?..........................................oh wait is loyalty the opposite of envy?

And I was hopeing Gluttony was going to show his true mouth, eat BlueBlood, and scare the crap out of everyone else for what he said about Lust! 'Sigh', well a guy can dream...

Anyone kinda feel bad for sloth for whats coming? If anyhting....my money is on Pinkie annoying the crap out of him! (the most hyperactive pony vs the lazyest thing EVAR!)