Princess Celestia is grateful that her dearest sister will finally know peace after her centuries of banishment but is surprised when events turn out differently than expected. Worse than that she is tormented by the return of somepony she had long buried.
Will she be able to find it within herself to forgive her sister for all she has done? More than that will she be able to ever forgive herself for all she has done or will she be destroyed by the memories of the pony the once loved?
Chapters (2)
That....physically hurt to read...especially the end...
6052962 Tell me this much. Tell me Luna isn't going to be, uh...tortured or anything like that. I had a strong enough stomch for this chapter, but only barely. If this is gonna take that path, I need to know so I can decide if I should keep reading or not.
EDIT: Actually, I guess you should be proud. Your first story made me physically react. That's talent right there.
I agree with the other guy if Luna is tortured I can't read it
In fact after the end I was wishing that Nightmare Moon actually killed Celestia
Thank you for your words. I have no idea what will happen next but you are giving me some nice ideas, I might change the rating or something if it get's too intense.
Ok, not gunna lie, I've read alot of iterations of Celestia. Some I like, some I love greatly, and others I despise with all my soul. Not gunna lie, how Celestia is reacting and working here at the end of the chapter...
She's learned nothing over the years.
If anything, she's getting worse, and the part that's killing me is I can see it happen so easily. Moreover, her behavior in front of her student doesn't seem to even register with her. After all is said and done, as of right now I do not like your Celestia. Not saying she's poorly done, or anything. But if she'd to be the center of the fic, you're likely gunna have a tough time keeping readers with the current format for her. We need to explore her a bit more, and moreover to get a more solid idea as to what is happening to her and what will happen to Luna.
If this goes down the route of Corrupted Celestia, ok, I'll fly with that. But afterwards comes the redemption, the VERY NECESSARY redemption of her character...plus Luna's healing, as letting her languish as she looks like she's gunna isn't going to settle well with me.
Still, for two chapters, you have my attention, let's see where this goes. Just keep in mind my thoughts, as I at least feel they might carry a small grain of what some others may feel too.
I concur with the rest the commenters I hope celestia realize what she is doing and ask her little sisters forgiveness and I realy don't what to see celestia become the pranode, all your fault, you are a mistake, and I blame you monster your out to make her.
Thank you all for the feedback, I wasn't planning on doing a sheer evil Celestia and there will be an explanation for current evil levels. Just bear with me!!
6062296 you are continuing this story right I like to see what happens next