• Member Since 29th May, 2015
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Starbright1996


Senior at Camas High School and about to graduate soon. I am planing to post my first story soon.

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The year is 2025, the Earth has been devastated by both World War Three and Nuclear war. Because of this most of the world's resources are destroyed, the only way to survive is to now go colonize space. This was the job for Charles Maximilian Helmholtz, where he is on his way to another earth like planet that is just outside our solar system. When he lands on Equstria he would have to prepare to both defend himself and one race from extinction.

(This is my first story on this website, I am a bit nervous on what you think. Please read at your own risk because it has been edited just a bit, meaning there is some spelling that could be spelled wrong I would definitely like some proof readers for this, but please comment).

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Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )
Comment posted by Outa-here deleted May 29th, 2015

Good story so far. Interesting concepts. I like the way you get straight to the point, hook the reader and keep them (me) interested and wanting to read more.

Kee up the good work! I'll be favoriting this story since I'm now dying to find out what happens next!

6031291 Thanks! I have never knew that this would be good, I have all chapters finished, but I do not know if they will be as good as my prologues

but that had just given me great motivation

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Excellent! It's nice to read that you're now motivated to do more. (Big, pleased smile here.)

To tell anyone, this feels like it is not my best work. It feels apparent when you read later chapters, too rushed and in my mind not my best writing. But it is my first story like it says so it is just an experiment. But thank you for reading this far and I will keep posting the story.

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