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The Cutie Mark Crusaders decide to put makeup on Big Macintosh while he's asleep. Unfortunately, the makeup won't come off, and he has a rodeo competition in an hour.
I want to give a quick thanks to Choya for proofreading, as well as the awesome folks at Midwest Brony Fest 2015 for supplying me the idea.
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Well that was..... different.
Good different.
heh funny
Funny fic, I like how you wrote out Braeburn! Also you have a typo:
Other than that, I like!
That picture made me crack up before I even read this.
Yeah, I'm a giver. I just give, give, give... You're welcome.
good it was good but like it didnt seem like 3000 words.
I liked it for what it was. 9/10 MLP pro!
And everything went better than expected.
Nicely done.
Wow. I completely forgot about this! That idea we selected for the panel write-off sure did get a lot better when given more than fifteen minutes to develop!
Only one thing though.
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(Yes that is me)
YOU WROTE OUT THE ACCENT!!!
Here's my two cents: Don't do this. It does nothing but distract from the story. We know that Applejack, Braeburn, and Big Mac drawl an speak with a southern dialect, so we don't need to see it every time they talk. It's just heavy-handed.
Other than that, good job on this story! It was great meeting you at the convention!
THIS FIC IS NOW CANON
You should change "imbecile" to a word that a filly like Apple Bloom would use. Try using "idiot" (or maybe "idjit :/ ) or "stupid head" (this one because why not :P ).
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Hmmmm... looking back on it, I think you might be right. I thought she used the term "imbecile" in the Hearts and Hooves episode, but I was mistaken, so I changed it to goofball.
6482029 Darn! I was going to make that joke, but you got here first!
He actually did something like this to himself for Brotherhooves Social. The makeover wasn't the mess.
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This was actually written and published before that episode premiered.
Soo, Cutie Marks are the pony equivalent of a Klondike bar, there is nothing some won't do for one.
This was pretty cute