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twilightsparkle3562


I am a brony from Massachusetts with Autism who enjoys MLP, Disney and writing!

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Following the Boston Marathon Bombings, a young man named Martin is visited by the newly crowned Princess Twilight Sparkle after he is injured in the bombings.

*Dedicated to the city of Boston, MA and its citizens. We are all Boston strong!

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6018149 I've been meaning to experiment with humans in ponies for the past few days. This probably one of those that would most likely end up in the dud category.:fluttercry:

As a native of Massachusetts, I felt like wanting to write something like this since the bombing at the Boston Marathon and I wanted to try it.

6018182 Well, I wasn't at the Boston marathon that day (I live about 45 miles south of Boston near Providence, RI), but some of my friends were there either watching or competing and they were just as traumatized as the next person who was there. Thank God that none of them were among those who were hurt. Good thing is that the scum got the death penalty for causing terror that day.

On a side note, what we sometimes see in "MLP:FIM," is sometimes like what we experience in real life. Take "Twilight's Kingdom," for example. The magnitude of the tension in the episode was through the roof and while the episode was good, it was very dark for an "MLP:FIM" episode, kind of like what we saw in Boston or anywhere in the world for that matter. In the episode, you saw examples of ponies getting drained of their magic, sent to Tartarus, have their homes blown to smithereens and that was just the tip of the iceberg. Its one of the few episodes I stay away from, the other being "Return of Harmony."

That's really cool. Nicely done :)

Since I don't want to downvote and run away, giggling like a mischievous schoolboy, have my criticisms. It's poorly executed, especially Twilight's entrance. Get a proofreader. That about covers everything I want to address, doesn't it? Yes, I think it does.

Now that I have the backing of morality, I can downvote as I please.

Well was a great idea in theory just brush up on the execution and it will be a real good story. (not many people here are writing things like these so I will give you plenty of credit for the Idea though.)

6018701 Thanks, you just inspired me to fix this fanfic.

Comment posted by Justy deleted Jun 17th, 2015

Uh..... It was probuly not a good idea to based a story on a real tragity. People might confuse you for a toll who made this to get reactions.

6118873 I've been experimenting with humans in pony stories and this was nothing more than an experiment. I usually base my stories off of episodes of the show, but since I am a Massachusetts native, I wanted to pay tribute to the people of Boston.

If you want a good human in Equestria story, check out Discord steals Bob Barker's Microphone.

6118916 Well, I was just warning you though.

6118938 Thanks for the heads up. Again, this was only a one time thing.

Following the Boston Marathon Bombings

Ooooooh, lordy. :rainbowderp:

Woooooooow what's the meaning of controversial :twilightoops:

Damn...My name is Martin and I'm a fan of Twilight :twilightoops:
However, Nice story ! :raritywink:

I always wanted to see Boston ok not always but I do now I would like to see the things from fo4 irl

7591637 you do have legs right?

6440620 is this a big bag problem of a little bag problem?

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