An android awakens in a testing facility and sets out to discover his own identity and purpose.
Great to see you on here man
Do dancing robots dream of disco sheep
5-star for the reference!
Don't I know you from someplace, mister?
Now I can stalk you in TWO places.
More, please! :D
OH EM EF GEE!!! I HAS FOLLOWERS!!!
Wow thats's a lot of updates :D
Keep up the good work! ^^ Just two things I noticed: all the underlining in one chapter, and there seems to be a distinct lack of question marks where there should be one?
Everything is underlined in chapter 7...might want to edit that.
B'AWWWW AT TEH REUNION
DO WANT MY CHARACTERS SOON SIR
>>4847948479 I fixed the underlined, and question marks? The way I was taught was that if you're ending a quote, the going into an exposition to finish the sentence, you don't need a question mark.
>>5222352223 Is coming! Is coming! Got four hooves only!
Great to see you here!
I am a bit dissapointed that you skipped two whole days :( the relationship between rose and verse is one of the things i like the most in this and it feels like a lot of dialouge between the two was skipped :/ on another note i speak good enough german to understand what was said by freida and i got the movie reference
>>5261452614 THEN GET MORE HOOVES AND WORK
>>5291852918 I've never seen the point of playing out a long period where nothing exciting happened. I've gone thru several in-game days where NOTHING showed up to poke at me. Granted this was endgame, but that's neither here nor there.
And really, if you want an explanation for what happened those two days? Nothing. You don't understand Night Rose yet. She doesn't make with pointless conversation. If there's nothing to talk about, or in this case if she doesn't want to talk, then she won't talk. Verse doesn't want to provoke her any more than he already has. He's realizing his feelings for her, and she's too proud to admit she likes him (until the end of this episode that is.)
So is this written because the android quest in fallout 3
>>5430854308 not really. I never did that quest. It's just an idea that had been bouncing around my brain for a while.
BTW, greatly enjoying your writing style.
Shadowstep was a name in the arena in oblivion good reference
Is it weird that when the leader said "One more thing" I thought of Uncle from Jackie Chan Adventures?
arroyo, isnt that the village from fallout 2?
>>6534165341 I honestly don't remember.
A lot of the time, what should be ... ends up as garbled numbers and whatnot. Just if you wanted to know.
>>6915569155 I'm copying it over from DA. For some reason their system converts ... and - to a alphanumeric code that I don't know anything about. I try to convert it when I see it but... Bloody hell why can't there be a STANDARD for posting??
>>6916669166 Because Discord is in charge of the Internets. He is the world's best troll, after all. Trollestia got nuthin' on him.
>>6918569185 Can't argue that logic.. now where's my chocolate rain?
>>6920769207 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EwTZ2xpQwpA Here you go!!
>>6928869288 I saw it coming too...
>>6929569295 Really, did you expect anything else from me?
Hey, a crossover in a crossover, mixing up characters with some characters. Now I have to find the chapter that matches up with this one...
My Apologies. This chapter just plain sucks. I'll do better next time.
>>6936469364 Probably. But meh. He's a highly advanced robot. He's already OP. Plus, its not like they have any effect on the story ^.=.^
>>6938969389 Huh? Where? What'd I miss?
>>6938969389 Oh lol ^.=.^ I think it's four chapters back in her story.
The "..." have been replaces by #133 or somesuch. Methinks you should edit this.
>>8557085570 Eh it still a good chapter dont beat yourself with a short chapter it is still part of a larger story
'Tis a fine chapter, my brony.
133....150 are u tryin to brain wash us
You sir, are a Gentlecolt and a Scholar. Keep up the good work
Please read the second last paragraph
"I nodded n[and] kissed her cheek"
Your work is quit good, although it could certainly do with some grammer, and more importantly, spelling checks. Keep it up.
That was in Chapter 12
A well written story and a great companion too the mainline Fallout Equestria. Good work!
Tell me, if the Enclave is all ready active, wasnt Canterlot destroyed within the past few weeks or have you all ready taken that into consideration and are preparing to implement it later. Sorry if this was some sort of spoiler but I thought I should ask to ensure continuinity.
>>115001115001 You've got to bear in mind that my story's timeline doesn't progress the same as Kkat's or Somber's. I truthfully right now believe that my story is long past the end of FoE main. That story, while being massive, only has a timeline just over two months. If we figure my journey started after Lilpip's (which it did) then right now, she's in the induced coma. And yes, I'm aware Canterlot is no more. It is taken into account for future episodes.
Damn. I forgot to get all those beautiful Balefire rounds...
I know that it is in advance of that timeline, the events in your story show that it began more around Chapter 38 or so. I was simply wondering if you had.
Anyway, sorry for the spoilers.