Pinkie Pie finds the love her life in the mysterious town of Griffonstone so she takes the necessary steps to make sure it doesn't become the statue that got away.
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6010590 I am glad I could help confirm it. ^_-
Very short, but I enjoyed it. Have a like, a fave, and a mustache
So much lol
6010615 Thank you for the the like and the favorite. XD I am glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for the mustache. Mustaches are awesome, ^0^
6010624 It was the first thing I thought of when I saw this episode. lol
Pygmalion, anyone?
6010638 Hey you are right! That would make a great subject for a longer fan fiction. ^^
Does Pinkie Pie needs help?
6010750 Naw, she is just being Pinkie Pie. XD Thank you for the favorites and the watch. I watched you as well.
6011103 It would be hilarious if Pinkie had a statue plushie. XD
6011122 That would be a riot!
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6011149
Now Pinkie Pie reminds me of Patrick Star.
6011149 Yes indeed. ^0^ Nice picture by the way.
I found this really funny, but it was mostly from the concept.
I think this has a lot of potential, but unfortunately you have that ever so pesky problem that many writers (including myself) have; the 'Show, don't tell' part of writing.
It's what leads to a story being very short, like this. When you go from 'point, to point, to point' without any real description, it doesn't pull the reader in, and it always ends up short.
Like I said, it's a great story, it's just the lack of detail that's a problem.
6011197 Yeah, I agree with you there. I just wanted to write the concept out before I lost the motivation to do anything with the story. :S I am thinking of adding some more details later. Would you happen to have any suggestions? Thank you for the follow. I returned the favor.
6011214 I noticed, thanks
Suggestions? Not off the top of my head, sorry.
6011226 I had a few ideas to make it more random. If I am motivated enough I will add them. :S
6011226 Well, I added a few more details. Including a dating sequence. XD I'll have to add more things as I think of them.
6011399 Alright!
Personally I think you should've fleshed it out a bit more before posting it (or at least before publishing it) but that's just me.
So uh, can we get a weird clopfic between the two? Just wondering.
You know what? Expect an Esperanto translation of this story soon.
6012821 I am sure it exists somewhere on the internet. Lol
6012969 That would be pretty sweet. XD
6013228 If you ever watched 1000 Ways To Die and seen the one where the man has sex with a statue he made, that is the one I'm curious of perhaps looking at, even if I pretty much don't like clopfics.
6013255 Interesting. I don't really write in that genre myself. I'm a comedy, fantasy/ adventure, horror story kind of writer. XD But kudos to the authors who do.
6013267 We just gotta spread it! XD
(And the man who was having sex with the statue got crushed in the end after rolling off his table.)
6013295 Pinkie Pie grew up on a rock farm so I don't think she'd get smashed by the statue. lol In any case, the original story sounds quite morbid. :0
6013313 Trust me... Look it up yourself...
6013340 I know that one person died from gluing themselves to the toilet. Boy is that a way to go. :o
This makes me wonder how google translate will take it after a few translations
Rainbow Dash and Pinkie official mission sent to Griffin Capital Grifoŝtono, solve the problem of a new friendship . When they came to the legendary city of old grifa rakonisto notify all those issues , which are designed to withstand , and they are meeting with Gilda, who explained that the issues should be resolved without nails .
Sounds about right
6014684 I have learned the hard way that google translate is not always your friend. I was trying to figure out a French word that wasn't in my French textbook so I used google translate to try to find the word. And let's just say that the way I used it in the sentence made it sound like the dude I was writing the story about really liked to wear dresses. :/
6013313
more like the statue would get crushed by her. Think about it if maud can crush stone why cant pinks? she better be careful when hugging grover. seriously this is funny as all hell. Anyway my theory is pinkie being able to talk to rocks may play in to a later episode when see her family. MAYBE i am not sure for all we know it could have just been pinkie being pinkie. I like to think she is a lot like maud then she lets on.
6014786 You've got a good point there. Pinkie Pie might actually have some kind of hidden ability to talk to stones/ rocks. I am happy that you liked the fan fiction. XD
6014684
Here, I took advantage of Esperanto's agglutinative grammatical structure.
Separate the words "Grifo" and "ŝtono," and you should get "Griffon Stone."
Wait, "rakonisto?" S
T, THAT'S A TYPO. (That should be "rakontisto.")
6014691
Tell me about it. Its Esperanto keeps mixing nominative with accusative, singular and plural (bonaj amikon is never correct). And the worst part is, if Google doesn't know the Esperanto word for something, IT WILL DIP INTO THE SPANISH LEXICON!!!
6014967 I'll make an edit and put the correct word wherever it needs to go. I've always liked Esperanto. Do a lot of people use it? One of my friends speaks it.
6015013
I first came across Esperanto in English class, when my teacher assigned Nineteen Eighty-Four. After visiting the Wikipedia article, I discovered Orwell's constructed language Newspeak was actually a slap to the face of Esperanto (and I suppose its creator, L. L. Zamenhof, as well).
Orwell went to visit a friend in France once. He came fully prepared to speak French. . . except the household language turned out to be Esperanto, and Orwell was caught off-guard.
Esperanto is the world's most popular constructed language, with some several million speakers scattered across the globe (but mostly concentrated in Europe). Of these, approximately 2000 of them are denaskuloj-- native speakers (!) of Esperanto. No other constructed language has native speakers!
As for your friend-- tell him/her I said "Saluton, ulo esperantisto!"
6015026 That is really interesting! I'd love to learn the language. XD
6015041
Please don't make the same mistake I did-- stay away from lernu!
lernu!, for instance, tells you that the rhotic (Rr) is pronounced as an alveolar tap, /ɾ/, but in fact it's an alveolar trill, /r/. Plus it'll tell you that Esperanto is head-initial (noun before adjective, like Spanish)-- it's actually head-final, just like English.
6015048 I'll keep that in mind. Would you happen to know a good resource?
6014851
thanks and no prob.
6015087
Read Zamenhof's publications. They're your best bet to learning the language.
There wasn't a whole lot that the Russian censor permitted in Poland at the time, but Zamenhof did get away with the Unua Libro (First Book) (link), Dua Libro (Second Book) (link), and the Fundamento de Esperanto (Foundation of Esperanto) (link).
EDIT: Also, Zamenhof also had a sort of petition-- if ten million people vowed to learn Esperanto, it would be decided to be the international language. Even though Zamenhof never collected the ten million signatures in his lifetime (he died in 1917), someone revived it online as "La Promeso."
EDIT: (Can't believe I didn't mention this earlier) Claude Piron wrote a book called Gerda Malaperis! (Gerda Vanished!) (pdf) Once you have a basic grasp on the language, Gerda Malaperis! helps you further along, as each successive chapter introduces more complex grammar. Small wonder it's considered one of the greatest contributions to the Esperanto language.
6016078 Cool! Thank you for the suggestions. I'll try to study some of the language so I can talk with my friend. XD
6014967 and that is why people love google translate
What if he's just enchanted into a statue, like Discord? Reattach the broken parts and he could be brought back to life. Perhaps he was turned to stone by the usurper king that followed him.
6018451 That is an interesting thing to think about. Maybe Pinkie Pie knows more than she is letting on. ^_-
I don't wanna break your ilussion but is another language fics not allowed in fimfiction?
6026271 I asked the site admins, and they said that just as long as a fan fiction in another language is posted as a separate chapter, it is allowed. My main fan fiction is in English. The separate chapter is in another language, as the site rules dictate. So to answer your question, a fan fiction can be posted in another language just as long as the main fan fiction is posted in English, and the different language is posted as a separate chapter.