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scifipony


Published Science Fiction Author and MLP G4 fanfiction writer. Like my work? Buy me a cuppa joe or visit my patreon!

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So Fluttershy said, “Pretty much everypony knows you’ll ask us out. Your performance at the Gala is the talk of the town. The Downtown Rag ran a transcript.” I said, "Well, then, dinner out?" To which Fluttershy replied, "Yes, if Tree Hugger agrees."

And there in a nutshell lies my problem: This red-maned Bohemian was inscrutable and unflappable. And picky about the food she puts in her temple. Worse, I had the uncanny feeling she was playing me. Me? Yeah, she didn’t remember meeting me. That was my line! So, how do you arrange a double date, without raining down chaos, and keeping every pony happy?

Well, I started by asking Spike about Rarity...

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Comment posted by scifipony deleted May 23rd, 2015

I liked it, have a fav and a like.
It's a pretty good story

I enjoyed it a lot. I loved how you had Discord and Tree Hugger bond.

The only criticism I can think of is that it's a little bit hard to follow at times, but I didn't have that much trouble. *shrug*

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@Hillbe: Thanks, and I can see how that might be. I'll do better next time.

Fun story, stumbled a bit at the beginning as it was a little difficult to follow the scene breaks. I like how even an immortal avatar of chaos can learn something new.

That Discord seems to suffer from a similar condition as Spike was humorous. Everyone knows his secret feelings yet we politely look the other way.

What in the world did i just read ?!

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