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Altoid's Stories (9)

Blood and Guts and Ponies
Patton and the crew of a tank get transported to Equestria. Stuff happens and chaos ensues.
60,309 words · 6,975 views · 860 likes · 30 dislikes
Ruby Eyes and Echoes Part One: The Struggles Begin
This is a story on how and orphan became Vinyl Scratch, the DJ Pon-3.
15,422 words · 1,209 views · 136 likes · 2 dislikes
Ruby Eyes and Echoes Part Two: The Struggle of a Lifetime
Vinyl Scratch has overcome many things in her life. But will this new challenge be too much?
24,710 words · 1,169 views · 131 likes · 3 dislikes
A Rose in the Sand
Rose visits the San Palomino Desert to find the ultimate florist treasure, the rare Gold Petaled Rose. But she gets lost in the sun drenched expanse and finds something else entirely.
6,024 words · 206 views · 24 likes · 0 dislikes
Merely an Animal
4,900 words · 436 views · 62 likes · 4 dislikes
The Tears Behind Her Smile
2,134 words · 739 views · 50 likes · 3 dislikes
The Pointless Adventures of Guinness
6,432 words · 156 views · 29 likes · 1 dislikes
Traveler
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Chaos and Insanity
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The Tears Behind Her Smile by Altoid

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When you will outlive the ponies that you love, the future becomes something that you fear. Cadence hides her fears behind her smile but one night the uncertainty becomes to great and she seeks out the answers to her future. Will the answers she learn drive her deeper into sorrow or will she come to grips with the painful truths that go along with being immortal in a world so prone to change.

First Published
18th May 2012

Last Modified
18th May 2012

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#1 · 53w, 19h ago ·

Dead Meadow - Black Label Society

Magnum-opuS

#2 · 53w, 19h ago ·

Old concept,but good writing.

Good job. liked. :moustache:

Bronzedragon

#3 · 53w, 19h ago ·

Good story. Again proving the point that being an immortal might not be the most wonderful thing in the world

Altoid

#4 · 53w, 19h ago ·

>>608468608468 >>608481608481 Thank you! :twilightsmile:

Starkie

#5 · 53w, 19h ago ·

You bastard you almost got a tear from me.

Backlit Bass

#6 · 53w, 17h ago ·

Manly tears bro, manly tears.

gforce

#7 · 53w, 17h ago ·

Well done sir, a bit sadder then what i normally read, but its always good to branch out now and then.

infinite scratch

#8 · 53w, 16h ago ·

The flaw of immortality

Reaper1oo

#9 · 53w, 6h ago ·

>>609513609513 Indeed

Also, nicely written :moustache:

Project-47

#10 · 49w, 3d ago ·

Now I understand why people who become immortal are always wanting to end it.

alpacamybooks

#11 · 47w, 3d ago ·

Beautiful.

I noticed two mistakes. In the middle-to-end range you put "the" instead of "she" and right before Cadence leaves Celestia she says "Goodby" instead of "Goodbye."

Altoid