Very nice. The intro worked really well here. Considerably less jarring than the previous one. Just a note that you accidentally left the final two lines in Rarity's white text.I think you might benefit from adding an image card of the ERB logo or a modified one. Even the simplest image is better than no image and the ERB logo should be instantly recognisable to fans.

I'm siding with Rarity on this one. Pinkie better stand back because Rarity's classy brand of burns is here to stay.

Dat ending. Yep, this is good. Cainiam likie. Cainiam likie a lot.

Going to have to side with RD on this one. Twilight almost had it, but that "Want it, need it" line cinched it for Rainbow.

RD had that in the bag. The Wonderbolts line just didn't do anything, and then the "want it need it" just ended it.

I guess I will be the first one to give it to Twilight, It was a close one though.  

Meh. No offense, but this wasn't as great as i was hoping it to be. I didn't understand why RD said Big Mac liked fat mares, and then called Twilight fat. That would mean that he likes her, right?

I promise, I WILL read this later. Mark my words...

Gotta go with Pinke Pie, if you mess up a rhyme, its all over...

>>634242634242

...RD never said big mac liked fat mares. where did you get that from?

I'm sorry but I have to disagree

Rarity's the one who got third degree

I'm sorry for my rap but your just a pour sap.

So leave now, Before I start to cap.

Im going with twilight

She was holding a hacksaw, wasn't she?

Tell me I'm wrong...or more importantly, tell me why they call it a hacksaw...

>>634278634278 LOL I read that wrong, but either way, it still seemed lacking.

pinkie was good but rarity seemed to get more hits in ill go with rarity she did  get many minus points for not rhymeing.

Do a Spike on please Do Spike vs Twilight family vs faimly.

I love it keep up the good work

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and and the way i think twilight won for sure

@Romeo Love

Pardon my intrusion about what you just said

But to think Pinkie lost you must've lost your head.

Rarity failed to rhyme once, that's worst than taking a long pause.

So pardon me sir, I do believe Rarity simply lost.

Okay, i was tempted to write that when i saw your comment....sorry.

As for the author, i love you for making this.

i side with Rainbow Dash on this one for some reason.

Twi me reckons

LOL when I saw the title I was like "Oh sht this has gotta be good!" You don't disappoint.

I dunno, both had good stuff but I feel as if RD got this one.

Very good. Oh, and first or something like that.

Brilliant! :D

... I want to see fluttershy destroy someone in one of these... anyone?

Sht this one's too close for me to call.

Gotta go with the Spa sisters on this one.

YELLOW IS SO HARD TO READ!!!  

holy crap pinkie blew rarity out of the water

thats awsome dude!

as much as I hate to say it, flim flam brothers definitely won that

i love you

>>634430634430 Have you tried setting the background to 'dark'?

epic, cool, badass, what else?

>>634475634475

...You can do that?

>>634491634491 Up near the top of the screen, above and to the right of the text, is a set of three drop-down boxes. Set the right-most one to 'dark', and enjoy reading yellow text.

Dash owned this one, Twi had some good ones but Dash brought it home.

Twilight nuked the round with that last line! Twilights the winner in my book.

I have to give to to Pinkie on this one, especially with that last line.

The Spa Sisters are the winners here, no question.

Rarity looses to best pony! (Don't say it if it don't rhyme btch!)

Go Pinkie!

Boo Flim and Flam! All your lines sucked!

I love to get into these more than I should. It's too easy and fun!

Hah, I hope ponys getting curious about who Vinyls talking too becomes a recurring gag.

For the next round, I choose (If you would allow it. ) Discord vs Chysalis

Gotta tell you, I don't know how much the 4th wall will be able to take. But nice last line XD and the forever at the beginning was hilarious

Solution to your picture problem: Have you considered MicTheMicrophone's Epic Pony Rap Battles of Equestria?

Spa sisters won by a landslide. They burned them with true past experiences that cannot be argued. That was a good rap battle.

As for the next one: CELESTIA VS LUNA!!!! You know you want to see that.

>>634584634584

you mean this pic?

Image: http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-BqudAd57Veo/TvzLctkyQpI/AAAAAAAAZoI/s75fpdxeHlo/s1600/Battle.png

because i'm not really sure i should. not as recognizable as the current one...

then again, there is also this picture that i found:

Image: http://i49.servimg.com/u/f49/13/89/01/70/rainbo10.png

though, to be honest, i've been avoiding any similar projects. i didn't want to accidentally copy something and be called a fraud or what have you.

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Dem brothers got served!

RD, for sure...dear lord! I just had an idea! Someone should totally skim through as many OC stories as they can find, and do this for OCs! I think that would just be awesome.

>>634706634706

...are you implying something, dear sir?

though, to be honest, that's not a bad idea. i might go along with that...

...later on, if at all.

Pinkie!

>>634311634311

>>634572634572

>>634622634622

the few comments that actually suggested a next one. let me be clear on one thing, though:

nopony will be submitted to a battle twice...unless popular demand asks for it.

i will take all of these into consideration.

Totally the spa sisters. I sing, and while it is hard to sing most of these (not quite enough words to finish the line well), such was not the case with their rhymes. I could sing their parts.

If not, I would consider doing it. I sing, and I feel I might start rapping...I can work with rhymes, and I'm familiar with a good number of OCs on the site.

>>634295634295

keep in mind, it was my first attempt.

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png

the others get better (at least, i hope so).

...maybe it's the lack of cursing?

Fluttershy vs. a dragon, anyone?

Owned by sex-education facts.

Twilight Sparkle wins.

Big Mac vs. Princess Celestia, get it? MAC vs. PC?

> <

Derpy vs. Prince Blue Blood, im just bored at this point.

Aloe and Lotus FTW!

WOOT!

AmIDoingItRight.plz

>>634844634844

Apple Jack vs. A box of Applejacks, applejacks win.

Big Mac VS Little Mac from Punch Out.

Cutie Mark Crusaders vs. The Wonder Bolts

Nightmare Moon vs. Discord vs. Changeling Queen

Octavia vs. Lyra

Psyco pinkie ending love it

Gotta vote for Twilight

spa sisters won it i wanna see trixie come back and battle twilight

>>634780634780

Wow. First you send these to me to rap and record them (sorry about that. I have been busy making gobs of money) and then you put them to a story. Nice work, man!

>>634466634466

Image: http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120428071353/adventuretimewithfinnandjake/images/a/a7/Challenge_accepted.jpg

>>634701634701

Damn straight.

>>634735634735

Hey, buddy, when you get a rap battle with the princesses, PM IT TO ME AND I PROMISE YOU WILL HAVE AN AUDIO RECORDING! (I am a guy, so I will have to rap both parts, but it will still be fun)

Dude........pinkie won

There is a rap pony battle on youtube.

>>635408635408

i realize that, but i am personally trying to avoid watching such things to prevent myself from being influenced by them.

...unless you were trying to say something else.

>>634897634897

...wow. i never expected to be rushed with so many suggestions for rap battles - especially from just one person! you, my good filly or gentlecolt, just made my day with these.

i will also take these into consideration.

I CAN"T CHOOSE!!

Pinkie won just because of this last line

Watch it, Rare, Pinkamena's on the case!

Why don't we put a smile on that face?

Challenging me like this is a huge mistake -

Leave! Before I feel like making cupcakes.

Spa sisters

>>634844634844

haha i see what you did there

Twilight. That last bit with her killed RD.

Pinkie won that one. But a F*** CUPCAKE REFERENCE! REALLY!? Why is it that everything I read that has Pinkie in it eventually lead to a cupcake reference? Is I some MLP FiM Fiction rule or something?

Oh snap. Nice rhyme and rhythm in this one; definitely be waiting for some awesome yellow rapping!

This is a tough one but I'm gonna say the Spa sisters. Here's an Idea no probably think of: Princess Molesita vs Lunaughty? Probably won't do it but it be very funny to see or even attempt

>>635778635778

thanks! but...what do you mean by "yellow rapping"?

>>635774635774

it was somepony else's idea. i just went along with it.

>>635788635788

...not entirely sure that would end with words... i have a pretty good idea who's going to be in the next battle, anyways.

...forgive me for that last emoticon. i did take what others said into consideration, though.

>>635818635818

Haha, I may think that Fluttershy's gonna rap soon is all

lolz

"want it need it" line

flawless victory

>>635422635422

Hmm. Its fine as long as you dont to the same pairings. But I really like the story.

Fluttershy vs. Gilda

You could spin it as payback for yelling at her in Gilda's episode.

Oh, and the spa sisters won by a wide margin

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

"Vinyl, who are you talking to?"

"Nopony you'd know!"

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png

EPIC RAP BATTLES OF MLP!

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png

VERSUS

Image: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png

BEGIN!

Tag Team Battle!

Spike/Sweetie Belle VS. Shining Armor/Cadence!

Somepony needs to make an animation/rap for these!

(gentlecolt) just sayin. Lols

1. Fluttershy vs Discord

2. Diamond  and That other friend that no one cares about vs The Cutie Mark Crusaders

3. Luna vs Queen Chrysalis

4. Blueblood vs Trixie

5. Derpy vs Discord

Someone needs to make a video of this NOW!!

Zecora VS Cadence

Twilight all the way

Pinkie wins!! love the cupcake line

SPA SISTERS!!! They totally won

Fluttershy vs. Gilda!!!

RD won.

Cupcakes reference??

PINKIE WINS

Better luck next time Rarity