YESS! Holy crap that was fast!

>>606125606125

My writer's itch refused to give up until I scratched it some more. And dang, you were fast commenting on this!

>>606144606144 Hmmm... Seems I was. Thanks for satisfying my thirst for literature!

Wait... So this is an Octavia shipfic that doesn't involve Vinyl Scratch? That's new.

>>606181606181

Not only does it not involve Vinyl Scratch, it also has shipping between male-female couples. I like doing things differently. XD

>>606186606186 "Not only does it not involve Vinyl Scratch, it also has shipping between male-female couples."

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It's a miracle!

I am glad that it did not take too long for you to get the sequel going. And I am definitely looking forward to the next chapters.  

>>606186606186

You rebel you.

Niiiiiiiiiiiice.

are you a wizard?

That was certainly faster than I expected. Looking forward to more!

Also, I keep expecting a salad finger reference.

Sweeeeeeeet.

Oh boy. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

I am so glad that you started the sequel so soon. I hate having to wait for amazing stories to update. It drives me

Loving it so far!

aMAREicas? sketchy you are almost as bad as hasbro when it comes to punny names... lovely

>>606811606811

Blame the fandom! I didn't come up with that one XD

damn, that poem is the shit.

Can't wait to read more!

And if you'll allow me to nitpick, I noticed a small typo: "Her capabilities with the the cello were held in great renown by those in classical circles; she was one whose name you only had to speak to such ponies for them to know exactly whom you were referring to."

Poems...

Sweet!  Writing lyrics for that eventual Sketchy Salad inspired song just get a hay of alot easier, haha!  Very pretty poem.

>>609389609389

Thanks! I'll go correct that.

I am very happy to see that you started the sequal so soon, and extremely ecstatic that it's already off to a great start.  The beginning was a bit of an info dump but it was enjoyable, and you did say that the prequal isn't required reading.  Anyway, it was enjoyable.  I can't wait for this to get in full swing and will no doubt enjoy reading it.

On that note, referring to your reply, it makes sense that you left some details to be expanded upon in this story.  I read that you were basing this all off of a Role-Play log, but I thought it ended with the conclusion of the last story.  Seeing as that was only a part of the log then I can accept leaving the bits unresolved.  I will be waiting for them to be addressed even more now though.

Good start Sketchy, damn good start.

Ooh, we're doing poems this time around?  Cool, it's been awhile since I've read any sort of poetry.

So, umm.. self-insert x Octavia?

I'll read it later though ^^

Whoa.

I disappear for a /week/, and already, Symphony finishes, Serenata starts, and there's /two/ chapters to read /plus/ a small pile of comments?!

I should start reading this alr—

> 651 unread emails

*is buried under a huge pile of mail*

FREEZE! HALP!

>>620492620492

Maybe something a little like that. Sketchy's a character in his own right, though. If you want self insertion, try my other fic which I may or may not release to the public :p

One of my favorite things about this story (and it's predecessor) is just how true to the spirit of the show it is. I had a smile on my face pretty much their entire conversation about friendship.

I really like the interaction between Octavia, Sketchy and Luna. It's just three good friends having a great time with some music, some laughter and some anecdotes. I like this fic so much as far as it being a slice of life tale. That plus the fact that there isn't any of the mane six or if there they are only there briefly, and you keep it in Canterlot.

Peace Out.  

You are by far one of my favourite writers. Every time I see that your stories have updates my face instantly looks like

I love how Octavia and Sketchy granted Luna's wish and treated her like a normal pony.

Keep up the excellent work!

As DJThomp said, I love how this fic stays true to the concept Friendship is Magic.

I feel positively bubbly after reading this chapter!  I was smiling throughout the whole thing.   I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I absolutely love Luna and Celestia's personalities.  And I love Luna's explanation of what raising the moon is like.  Fantastically sweet and interesting.

Gah! I just love everything about this story! ^__^

And, oh my god, Luna sliding down the palace hallways in socks?  All of my laughs! :D

You almost had me in the floor a few times there Sketchy, keep up the good work.

A nice, sweet scene. Also, it's nice not to go into a panic whenever you update.

Clock is ticking, Parchment!

>>624614624614

+100500 to every word.

One of the main reasons I love this fic so much is the unique writing style. It really makes it stand out.

And I have to agree that I also had a grin plastered on my face all the way through the characters' chat.

Heehee... Luna sliding around in socks...

>>627036627036

I swear I'm going to draw it at some point.

>>627134627134

Looking forward to it.

>>624614624614

> Luna sliding

Sliding…sliding all over the place, maybe…? :3

>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0cY2NWlddU — Two Best Sisters Play Portal 2

*smooth jazz here*

>>626243626243

This.

(Agreeing with a comment that's just agreeing with another comment…)

>>627134627134

YES

YOU MUST DO THIS

GO NOW AND…!

I finally got around to reading this and even though I've said it before, I need to say it again...

I love your characterization of Luna! It has to be one of, if not my top, favorites.

>>621478621478

Aw man, my prejudices grew faster there than RD flies

>>621478621478

Well now I'm curious about this other fic

>>631558631558

It's an unfinished HiE idea which is a blatant author insert. I'm not proud of it. XD

>>631384631384

Que?

>>632027632027

A fanficiton including a canon character and a self-insert, which isn't going to be published publicly.

Add a twisted, dirty mind.

You get what I mean?

>>636126636126

...ewwwwww!

>>636481636481

I know right? Don't worry, it's only in me and not outside me.

>>632016632016

You should publish it!

Why?

Well, whythehecknot!

Today I was horrified to discover that I had neglected to thumbs up and favorite this story when you first posted it.   I can assure that the situation has been remedied.

Also, I found this. "“I could go for some too, if you’d be so kind honey.” Sketchy added."  Should be a comma between kind and honey, since he's addressing her as such.

>>698379698379

Thanks, I've fixed that.

Oh by the way, the next chapter's nearly finished. :)

>>699230699230 It's been a while - Just want to make sure you didn't die or something.  Still goin' strong?

>>752578752578

One cannot rush art.

>>753430753430 Wasn't trying to.  Sorry if I came off that way.

>>755119755119

You didn't. I'm just saying it'll take time :)

I have RL issues slowing me down at the moment.

The relationship between Freezy and Blackie is such a cute one and you do such an excellent job of developing the personalities of all the characters. I love you stories and look forward to reading more.

Been waiting for an update on this for forever (I am also planning on finishing your book tonight or tommorow)

>>891988891988

Let me know what you think of both!

SS Serenata update!

*drops everything and reads*

I love how you write Celestia, it's such a refreshing take on her personality.

Freezy and Blackie are so cute I don't have the words for it, I'll let Dash sum it up for me:

>>892133892133

Your enthusiasm is inspiring, thank you! :)

>>892229892229

I love writing her. Heck, I love Celly herself to bits, she is quite probably my favourite character. If I'd been blessed with a big sister I'd have wanted her to be just like Celestia. Personality wise, that is. I wouldn't want her capable of banishing me to the moon, that would be scary as hell. XD

Omg omg omg!!!... Huge contrast from the other fics I read, SADFICS by chaotic harmony, sketchy you are one of the greatest fanfic writers I have found. Keep on with your story and your music!!

>>892316892316

You went in my room...

Do you like, Mmmmmmbananas?

As usually a excellent enjoyable chapter!

Man, it's been so long since I've had time to check on FiMFiction, I'm shocked to find you haven't written a whole lot more. Fun and well-written as usual, Sketchy!

I am very glad to see that you updated SSS and also the return of Blackie!  Twas only a matter of time for both.  I look forward to the next time you update!

>>897737897737

I was in a bit of a slump. Drained myself from finishing Symphony and starting this, I think.

>>898052898052

He hates being called that, you know. Unless your name is Freeze Pop ;p

>>898225898225

He hates being called that, you know.

Oh, re-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-e-eally?

>>898501898501

By anyone other than Freezy, yes. She's allowed to call him that.

>>898225898225  I was not aware of this and now I do.  

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You know you've got something good to read when you simply can't stop smiling.

Man, you honestly write the most heartwarming stuff.  I giggled while reading the massage dialogue, too, that was just adorable.  I may have said it before, but I adore the dynamic you have going between the guards and the Princesses.  It's quite honestly the best I've seen written, so carefree and lax.  It's cool to see Freezy's interaction with the new guy too, basically letting him know what the guard is like, as well as who to look out for.  Socks indeed Luna

And now that we have Blacklight re-introduced, the adorable factors can once again continue to climb.  

Good to see you updating again man, can't wait to see what comes next

>>903509903509 Well said, sir.  You pretty much summerized everying I was about to write down.

_________________

Freeze Pop smiled as she closed the gap between the two, pressing her nose into his. “Yep. You went and made off with my heart a few weeks back, you thieving scoundrel.”

Dang, I had no idea Freeze could be so cute.

The way you write the guards is quite neat; That's one thing that this fic does well - It's serious enough to feel real, but light-hearted enough to fit in with FiM's canon seamlessly.  Cool to see a cameo from Shining Armor.  And hey, now I think we can be pretty sure who it was that Octavia heard singing all that time ago!

Also, this might be reading into things too much, but here's something I noticed:

Celestia laughed at that, a warm smile on her face. “No my dear. You have pride in your abilities, as well you should. There is nothing wrong with that, so long as it is not taken too far. I believe one of my student’s friends learned that lesson herself not too long ago.”

That and the fact that no mention was made - mentally by Freeze Pop or by the narration - of Shining Armor's wedding could indicate that this fic is based prior to the events of the Royal Wedding.  Does this mean that perhaps we will get to see how it went down for Sketchy and the others during the invasion and all that jazz?  Who knows!

>>904314904314

Well then... thanks ^_^

Don't let me keep you from writing down all your thoughts, though.  Lord knows authors love and deserve comments, especially Sketchy.

On the topic of the royal wedding... That actually sounds like a tremendous idea!  It certainly would be very interesting to see what the characters would do in the situation, especially Freezy (and Blacklight in extension, but then again I just like him).  There is an argument to this, however.  Keep in mind that Sketchy is molding this story from an old roleplay log.  All the characters and story direction were pre-created, and seeing as the last story was written well before the season finale, I doubt they would have the wedding in the log (that is, unless the log is currently still going).  If the wedding scene were to happen, he'd have to deviate from the "plan".

Now I'm not the author, of course, so I could be spouting nonesense.  Just tossing in my two cents

>>904314904314

>>904959904959

Just wait and see. :)

Lulu; during time of her banishment.

>>961841961841

Nnnnope. Simply a short poetic introduction to the following chapter. :)

>>963203963203

Finally got around to finishing the book. I think it well written and worth the money, and am interested in the the possibility of a second book.

>>973614973614

Book 2's already in the works! :)

Well, it's about gol-durn time!   Seriously, though, a very fun chapter.  I love the way you write the princesses.

ERMAHGERD update! *drops everything and reads*

Excellent chapter! I love the playful Luna and how informal the two princesses are when no one important is around.

This may be my favorite chapter yet between both stories. The scene where they played for Celestia was simply beautiful.

>>10415251041525

>>10416641041664

The princesses are honestly my favourite secondary characters to write for. I love giving them some characterisation, and exploring the side of them that isn't shown off in public :)

Updates, oh how I love thee.

Ok... ok... ok... OMG this is the best chapter yet!!!! I am intrested in one major thing, how are you going to characterize Sketchy's Mom? She is from Amareica, correct?

>>10486891048689

You'll see next chapter. And while she currently resides there there, it is not her place of birth :)

But even residing in an area can change the way you act, and the way you do things. How long has she been residing there?

>>10503021050302

Only a few years, as opposed to the more or less of a lifetime's worth she spent in her place of origin. You'll see for yourself soon enough ;)

But... But... ok... Also when is the next thing between Freeze and Blackie gonna occur?

I absolutely adore your characterization of Luna. She's just so lovable and cute in this story! And it warms my heart to see her getting along so well with Sketchy and Octavia.

Gah!  I'm so terribly late with this update!  I denied myself Luna's hilarious hi-jinks for six days, what is wrong with me?

That has been righted, the story has been enjoyed, and I can't wait to see how you write Sketchy's mother.  Geez, this is still the best slice of life fic I have ever had the pleasure of reading, and your princesses are both adorable beyond belief.

Keep up the excellent work, man

An absolutely heart warming chapter!  This is feel-good writing done well.  Luna is such a cool mare.  You do a spectacular job at pulling off her mischievous character and having it feel real.  Same with Celestia!  We need another chapter of just the two princesses.

I felt like a couple of places were a bit under-explained.  Like the carousel and music room.  I had a bit of a hard time completing my mental picture of those.  But that's my only complaint.

It'll be interesting to meet Trillian Tones.  I'm looking forward to seeing what she's like.  

All in all, the journey of smiles is looking better than ever!

Edit: Almost forgot to ask, will you be sending this to EQD?  Or do you think it's too OC-heavy?

DAYUM, Sketchy!  Do you come up with these by yourself, or do you have a slave to write these, or a mixture?  I like the arias almost as good as the Intermezzos.  Let us see how they shall compete...

>>11116181111618

The only reason I haven't submitted it to EQD is due to the fact i don't have a cover image yet. If I had one, it would be submitted in no time.

Very well done. I like Sketchy's mom. And now I'm off to busy out some translations.

Yep, that phrase would definitly make someone blush haha!

Good chapter as always :-D

What is the meaning of that phrase that made Octavia blush so much?

Sketchy's mom is great! And I love the idea of Octavia having an Italian background.

>>11749961174996 According to Google translate, "Come, my dear, let's make love under the stars."

Spectacular.

... wow... pretty amazing.. Did Sketchy's mom really just tell her son to say that to Octavia!?!   I cant wait for when Sketchy actually says that  

I think it will be Awkward

Haha, that's a sexy line.

Hopefully there will be proper buildup so it won't be awkward.

>>11749961174996

>>11750491175049

That is exactly correct :)

>>11757651175765

She did indeed, because having a giggle at Sketchy's expense by means of an unfamiliar language is hilarious.

>>11761041176104

I'm not yet sure if I will actually have him say this to her during the fic itself - and if I do, I won't be going into detail about what happens. I'm trying to keep this within the rating I gave it, after all. XD

Agreed to that good sir

>>11764031176403

Well sure, there are ways of suggesting what's going on without actually going into detail. He could say the line, her reaction, and then you end the scene right there. :)

I really like this and it feels good after reading this. So often writers focus on creating conflict for the sake of conflict, but you just focus on telling a good story about a small group of friends in the capital city. This is the definition of "slice of life." Something tells me that Sketchy may screw up that phrase, but part of me says he may not because it's been established that he has a great memory. I'm rambling.

Somehow Tavy earned a very male, very poor Russian accent along the way. It was horrifying.

So very happy to finally have an update although I had to re-read a bit of the last chapter to get an idea of where we were in the story.