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Octavic 900

Joined April 2012
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    Octavic's Stories (9)

    • Daring Do and the Legend of Herobrine
      Another breath taking adventure of Daring Do, will she survive?

      8,695 words · 983 views · 49 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Broken strings
      The story of Octavia and Vinyl, kind of a sad one
      18,704 words · 715 views · 44 likes · 2 dislikes
    • My little Tavi
      In a world filled with pain and despair, a lonely boy and a lonely filly shared each other's warmth
      9,431 words · 553 views · 32 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Seven rooms
      Rarity and Sweetie bell was kidnapped. How will they escape death and find freedom?
      9,701 words · 338 views · 16 likes · 2 dislikes
    • On the other hoof
      8,157 words · 260 views · 10 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Memory of the eye
      5,788 words · 332 views · 6 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Derpy and Hurpy
      6,881 words · 406 views · 13 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Got your hoof
      6,673 words · 153 views · 2 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Warmth of the sunlight
      10,025 words · 137 views · 1 likes · 4 dislikes

    Based on "Memory of the eye" written by Famous Japanese writer Otsuichi (Aka 乙一)

    In an alternative universe, Twilight was still alone. But it wasn't because she was a book warm. It was because she had lost her eyesight in an accident when she was young. She had to stay in door, and she dreamed about having friends to talk to and play with. The Owl ran into her by accident, and immediately fell in love.

    Warning: contain a little bit of gore details. The ending is very sad, you have been warned.

    First Published
    17th May 2012
    Last Modified
    21st May 2012

    Comments ( 11 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Interesting :trixieshiftright: Let's see where this goes :pinkiesmile: Just a few spelling mistakes here and there, but the story itself is interesting to read :pinkiehappy:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    this is GREAT(still, you need an editor)

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    A few grammatical errors here and there, but aside from that, it's great. Followed

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Seems a bit... too sad for my tastes...

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ooh, interesting. A bit ... weird though :rainbowderp: , but nontheless interesting :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Well....thats a disturbing way to someones heart

    #7 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>606835 we ain't even at the sad part yet :trixieshiftright:

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>607520

    Wouldn't know. I didn't read... :twilightblush: I followed you for Broken Strings... since that's done (Edit: No it's not... XD)... I'm just waiting for something else more of my liking by you.

    #9 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>608187 lol i will write a more "daww" and happy fanfic later, after im done with this and broken strings and daring do with herobrine

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 53w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>608608

    XD Danke Shöne! That's awesome!

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 52w, 4d ago · · ·
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    The ending seems a bit rushed. I would have kept it going, but nonetheless, faved.

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