Twilight Sparkle didn't expect Starlight Glimmer to ever return. Even more surprising is that she wants help. From her! Has Starlight Glimmer really changed for good?
Part of Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Grounds.
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Great story!
I love the idea of Starlight reinventing herself as an author.
The only thing I would change: The short description of the story doesn't do it justice. I would take your long description (minus the Writer's Training Group sentence) and use it as your short description as well, since it reflects the story a bit better and might entice more people into reading it.
Keep up the good work!
I never saw this coming, Starlight becoming an author? Now that is a great turnaround and it is obvious that Twilight is very happy for her. Great story!
I really liked this story of yours. I think it should be expanded upon.
so heart breaking. and each fic i read about starlight slowly makes me more interested in starlight.
I’m going to let my OCD get the best of me.
You need to separate the character’s thoughts from the rest of the sentences. Example:
Notice how Starlight’s thoughts are italicized? Thoughts aren’t any different from spoken dialogue, you just need to distinguish between the two.