After a year of strict training Rainbow Dash is accepted onto the Wonderbolts, and at last her dreams are coming true. But an encounter with a face from the past sparks an obsession that leads her to confront the roots of her ambition, and puts her relationships with her oldest friend and her idol to the test.
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Not even halfway through the first chapter did I realize this would be a good story. You've got yourself a favorite.
EDIT: Also, have a follower!
This is great so far. Can't wait to see what you have in store next.
Fantastic new chapter. I just love your prose, and your characterizations. The whole chewing-the-fetlocks was a neat pony version of chewing one's nails. Keep up the good work.
i liek
*Breaths in*
sir...i am not dissapoint
keep it up
Beautiful. A really wonderful and unique story. I've seen a lot of stories that either end with Dash joining the Wonderbolts, or leaving to go back to her friends. Some are written really well and others, not so much. But this one is really interesting and original, as well as being greatly written, well paced and spot on with character development. Bravo!
another great story coming to a close...
Such a wonderful story! It's a shame it doesn't have more views.
On a side note, nimbus buns sound pretty darn delicious.
Not a big fan on Rainbow Dash stories, but I can tell this is straight fire. Here's a like.
Ya welcome, my nigga.