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A thousand years ago, after learning the magic of friendship, Scorpan betrayed his evil brother, Lord Tirek, to protect his new found friends and to keep peace across the land of Equestria. To protect the innocent, make new friends, and imprison his brother...would become Scorpan's biggest mistake.

He now rules his kingdom and has brought peace to all that he's been associated too. But as the lives of his old friends pass on and his actions become old and forgotten stories, one thing still lingers on his mind: How much he misses his brother. it's a pain that only he can understand. Because of this, he no longer knows if he made the right choice all those years ago.

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Not bad, not bad at all! I´ve always found Scorpan´s figure fascinating, even more tragic than Luna. I´ve also tried to work with him but I´m not sure I succeeded. Anyway, nice work.
The plot is solid, the characters are interesting enough to keep the story flowing naturally, Scorpan´s tragedy is easily appreciable... In general, the story is pretty good.
The narration isn´t exactly my favorite kind; too simple for my taste. Not bad, don´t misinterpret me, but nothing too great. It does its work anyway.
I really liked that Scorpan actually feels resent towards Celestia for redeeming her sister while she left Tirek to rot, specially when Nightmare Moon´s plans were far more destructive than Tirek´s. In fact, why the hell is Tirek in a foreign prison condemned under another country´s laws? After they reached a truce, shouldn´t Scorpan have reclaimed Tirek´s custody? Or are laws in Equestria like that? I can see why he´s mad.
Hey, you made me ramble! Congrats! In any case, great story.

Strangely I can't help but think Scorpan should talk to Discord when it comes to regrets and Tirek

Does this really have to be a one shot??? Because it was very good. Pity. But still going to my favourites bookshelf

7610633 I do have plans to use the characters here in another story.

7610843 YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I feel like creating some sort of Civilization-esque game or fan fiction based on how Scorpan leads Tambelon into its current age of peace and prosperity and friendship with Equestria and the rest of the world.

7693548 I'm curious to see how that can be turned into a game.

7696451 Basically, it's a civilization-building game of sorts, told in the form of Scorpan writing his memoirs.

Among other things, he has to deal with nobles and the like who, at first, split from Scorpan's nation to form their own groups. Scorpan has to find a way to get these warlords to return to the fold.

I wonder how Scorpan might react to the return of Star Swirl?

I wonder how Scorpan might react to the reappearance of Starswirl the Bearded.

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