One day, while fooling around her parent's house, Rainbow Dash discovers the journal of her father Dash Blade, who happened to be a royal guard. After reading it for a while, she finally understands her father a little more, why he left the family and never came back.
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I like your style
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Pay attention to your punctuation, though.
Great premise! It's a shame the chapters are so short though.
"These past week has been very" should be "This past week". I'm liking this so far though.
630275 I plan to add a couple extra days to chapter 2
Very good, but if this is Dash's father, Luna wouldn't be back, right?
Excellent story, I hope to see more.
Nice to see another chapter.
Luna? Luna didnt "Exist" back then no pony knew about her